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The MAd Rapper

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i'm mad a lunitic losing it always downin booze an 5ths
confused an shit ridin beats like bowls out the chutes an rips
i deucing chicks cuz i'm broke can afford to cruise in whips
theres proven shifts in my physcie i might be likely to change faces
gemini arranged placement 2 men with the very same faces
my brain phases in and out like texas hold um game aces
i tame races like Dale jr. in his hayday and may say
crude words in a maylay cuz you kim and i'm the ray J
alway stuck in a crazed state i like to watch an ass shake
in past days i was placed in a asylum on a distant island
didnt need fists an violence to escape i uses spits that stylish
could be swift an silent but im fly so i'm a gifted pilot
strollin blitzed with nothing but tiny slits in eyelids
im fuckin bonkers zanny mentally unstable but capable
unbreakable unmistakable fluid stlye i got ladles full
screws loose sanity debatable thats why i blaze the bowls
i pray to go off the rocker dailly the mad rappers untraceable
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you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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watch out deaf shady might steal this!!!
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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lol

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Post by MC Believe »

Couldve gone deeper with the concept and message also could've used a better opener&closer lines

But i Loved the flow on this It came out Nice on the flow like Niagra

Had some Nice Metaphors Tucked in there too
The Dale Jr in his Hayday was my favorite
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Post by FlipSide »

i'm mad a lunitic losing it always downin booze an 5ths
confused an shit ridin beats like bowls out the chutes an rips
Everytime i read a joint by u the first line fucks me up.. The Flow Just be nasty

I think this was a dope drop ... I feel what TOYH Says But i was a fan... Had some Very Good Flow... Crazy Ideas Out there... Goood Lines And Bars...Here n There.. Overall Kept My Interest From Start to End ^^
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