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Audible Thought
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Harsh Reality

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its a harsh reality, our principalities are obsolete
in the streets its the men with the heat on the seat
the preacher is the drug dealer with the weed
teacher is the thug who made it out his teens
its a gritty scene ain't no signs of change
so we stuck in the same game grindin for change
rhymin or cane playing ball or the work place
chooose your way, either one will be a tough phase
in ya life, we all pay the price
thats why anger strikes the mic i write to fight
but the fight aint right we loosin lives over here
while the commander in charge is sippin on his beer
lets get some shit clear i dont trust the government
i know for a fact that the crack shit they're fundin it
walking in iraq with a pack of killers
that used to be the dealers with a change of feelings
wanted to do good they joined the army
didn't know they were shootin innocent that are starving
now they're back home haunted by the bombardment
its a fucked up world evil's trapped in our conscience
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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Re: Harsh Reality

Post by - Mutual - »

mayne this wasnt bad, the mutlies were alright, started off well but started to fall off as you got further down the lines, but you know practise makes perfect, this was worth the read, keep it comin man
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Harsh Reality

Post by FlipSide »

It was an alright drop, overall it had your message and it carried through.. i felt there couldve been some more wordplay in there... btw U A Vet ?
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