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Fear The Labour

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Fear The Labour

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This is a song by one of my best friends, and this looked like a great site to give and receive feedback. None of these songs are his beats, which is why we haven't got a Soundclick yet. ANyways here it is, thanks for the feedback!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugafZ2yR ... re=related
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Re: Fear The Labour

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The quality was dope and his lyrics were tight but the beat was so bad it was hard to listen to.
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Re: Fear The Labour

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Dope lyrics and I really like the more complicated approach with your multis. Nice choice of words and the flow was on point. I can't say I agree with Sentus though...I personally thought the beat was off the chain! haha I like the Citar riff in there, so it's a shame you don't own the rights to the beat. But none the less...it's excellent mixtape material.

Great drop...thanks for sharing. Overall I'll rate this one an 8.5 out of 10
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Re: Fear The Labour

Post by FlipSide »

the flow is sick on this...i like the feel of the beat as well... straight blacking out on this... the quality is a lil off ithink tho.. im not shure.. maybe u were going for that sound.. over all i liked it... its different from the usual... Nice drizzop
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