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first audio drop.. freestylin w hook

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hows the quality sound?
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Re: first audio drop.. freestylin w hook

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you need to raise the vocals up and i think it will sound good maybe could be made slightly crisper thats easy to do though was a good listen keep this shit comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: first audio drop.. freestylin w hook

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Ok.... im not feeling the hook.. the beats tight tho.. u got some flow there but u have a lot of room for elevation... I think u went for the swagg tip on this but it does not display much of ya skills... rhymeschemes were simplistic.. i musta hearrd getting money enough to not look at a dollar for the rest of today...sike... i love my money..wont go with out saying that i would like to see u drop some lyrical work
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Re: first audio drop.. freestylin w hook

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Ahhh This Sounded Hard as Fuck in The Beginnin, I'm feelin This..

Whats The Name Of this Beat?
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this was something i was messin round with..to get feedback on the quality. beats fuckin bonkerz
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^ I PErsonally Think The Quality On This Was Better Then The Other Two (From What i Remember). I Kinda Didn't Like Ya Other Freestyles Though lol. You Rappin With a Computer Mic Or Somethin?
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i just havent figued out how to mix the voice right yet.. its a USB mic. the first one how i usually do it. but then said turn it up.. so i just posted to see. i like the first one quality better myself.
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