a Verbal traveler

[eMCee Havic]

going off the deep end again folks
swim in ink pools with pen strokes
its impulse for me you see i'm on a higher level
evil my souls goal is to retire devils
the fire settles but im an inferno on the mic
you rankin me? im a colonel you a stripe
theres no fight game over you out of lives
I pound the proud leave um wit out an ounce of pride
You pout I ride wrong but I doubt your right
I’m over your head so you can call me the roof
Call me the truth you were just falsely accused
You sob and excuse your self in a gods presence
Not holy but I’m solely auth-en-tic
Im raw get it? Eddie murphey I Stretch leathers
Rappers bust sentences but only stretch letters
You pets feathers while I tip the scale
bitch rappers call them selves doggs they lick at tails
your buckets empty but you say your sick of pales(white haters lol)

thats all for now uppin

[FlipSide]

going off the deep end again folks
swim in ink pools with pen strokes

This is a great bar to kick it off with... good stuff there, especially the second line

As for the rest..i would quote but theyd be lines... or groups of three.. the way u transition with using ur rhyming words at the end or beggining of separate bars is interesting... i must say i have found myself doing that as well and figured it was a lack of being able to fit it in structure. This flowed well too me however and i think would sound right if u were to spit it on a freestyle or recording of sorts.