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The Game

Post by SacredVerse »

The place is silent, Shady, the lines in my mind are makin me Crazy
Fuck playin the beat, I let the beat Play Me, hopin that Maybe
They'll Make Me see the embedded genetics that got me Stressin to Be
The sickest and Leet of these illest MC's.. life's a Lesson to See
A Weapon in Reach means one less cat's gone be Messin wit Me
Mother's tears Puddle the Ground, cuz I kept the gun Bundled Around
Stashed in the sweater, SV known to not talk, Gut Clutch the Pound
Throw a sign wit the left, leave the right for the Fearsome Rounds
Leave foes "Layed" with the potato and bottle to Muffle the Sound
This was the life I was given, the cards I was Dealt My Way
Dude never had a chance, the heat I packed straight Melted him Away
.... ....... ......
I blasted my brother... you'll never know the pain I Felt that Day
But he was in my way, it was either kill for my fam or kill my Fam
And I chose the one represented by the rag and the tats on my Hand
I feel like a traitor, a killer, the definition of a Coward
So I'm drowning my sorrow, getting baptized in this lead Shower
Because I'm a victim of the streets, and my deaths in my Power....

*Click*
The pain I've caused is nothing to the pain I Suffer...
I don't deserve this life, so I'm off to meet my Brother...
*BOOM*
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Re: The Game

Post by QwarterZ »

The beginning was dope, then you kinda killed it with you thuggery
but it's prolly cuz I've been more focused on a vivid feeling more then anything
so it really doesn't matter what I say, just my opinion you know
your flow is nice tho, very fluent, the 2nd part of this didn't stand out that much to me tho', but it's still got a dope vibe you know what I'm sayin'? either way keep it up bruh!
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