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CYPHA SOUNDS

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Delivery Shit.. Like Potty Vendors,
I Body Spittaz Hot As Bugatti's Wit Tires Spinnin',
Didn't Ya Know? "Illest" Niggas "Sway The Poll/Pole", Like Exotic Strippaz - Cre@T!Ve

Never catch phame, tossin figures, flow caution somewhere lost in rivers

Tha way she ball is like A.I, stay fly crossin niggas
-STuD PHaMoUS

Bonnie Clyde Shit.. Kinda Awkward You'd Find,
Ya Partner A Year Later From 2009, Get Ya Wig Split, By Movin' Ya Big Lips 2 A Kingpin,
Toss U in A Coffin.. Watch You Burn Slow, From Thee Inferno of Ruger Shells & Grenade Pins - Cre@T!Ve

I`m used 2 dudes hate-in, I move smoother than butter, words of a master,
its proven you love her, Leavin' niggas fucked what dicks Do 2 Tha rubber,

Doin' me while yall doin each other -STuD PHaMoUS

Sufferin' From The Pain, Plug Ya Frame 4 Stuntin' 'Gainst "Studded Phame",
Shit Hasn't "Changed" Cuz The Bitches Still Holla 4 A Dolla Just The Same,
Yeah Simple & Plain I'll Keep Real, Smoke & Blow Chill Watch These Feins Smoke Open-Nosed
& Blow Krills, Act Up... You'll Get "Clapped Up" While Ya Mans Choke On Cold Steel - Cre@T!Ve

Mah folks is so real, tha flow is so ill , sicker than most, livin in ghost, switchin from coast,
spittin tha dope, rippin ya folks, flyer than tha clouds, on higher amounts,

femcees shook like pilot's in turberlance, dentist rhymes, how i work tha spit
-STuD PHaMoUS

All in Due Time, We Don't Need Ta Coast Phame, All We Do is "Cruise" Lines,
I Stare & Gloat, While You Air Ya Vision I'm A Clear The Smoke,
Trips On Jet Skii's While You Steer The Boat, Creative Minds "illuminate"& Prepare 4 Growth,
Watch em' Open "Blinds", Briefly Meditate & Tear The Rope - Cre@T!Ve
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Re: CYPHA SOUNDS

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Cre@T!Ve wrote:Delivery Shit.. Like Potty Vendors,
I Body Spittaz Hot As Bugatti's Wit Tires Spinnin',
Didn't Ya Know? "Illest" Niggas "Sway The Poll/Pole", Like Exotic Strippaz - Cre@T!Ve

I don't know what to make of that. Dope concepts with lame rhyming.

Never catch phame, tossin figures, flow caution somewhere lost in rivers

Tha way she ball is like A.I, stay fly crossin niggas
-STuD PHaMoUS

Cool.


Bonnie Clyde Shit.. Kinda Awkward You'd Find,
Ya Partner A Year Later From 2009, Get Ya Wig Split, By Movin' Ya Big Lips 2 A Kingpin,
Toss U in A Coffin.. Watch You Burn Slow, From Thee Inferno of Ruger Shells & Grenade Pins - Cre@T!Ve

Another weak rhyme with good content.

I`m used 2 dudes hate-in, I move smoother than butter, words of a master,
its proven you love her, Leavin' niggas fucked what dicks Do 2 Tha rubber,

Doin' me while yall doin each other -STuD PHaMoUS

Classic Rell setup.

Sufferin' From The Pain, Plug Ya Frame 4 Stuntin' 'Gainst "Studded Phame",
Shit Hasn't "Changed" Cuz The Bitches Still Holla 4 A Dolla Just The Same,
Yeah Simple & Plain I'll Keep Real, Smoke & Blow Chill Watch These Feins Smoke Open-Nosed
& Blow Krills, Act Up... You'll Get "Clapped Up" While Ya Mans Choke On Cold Steel - Cre@T!Ve

Once again, Creative playing with other peoples styles. Worked better there. I know what you're trying to, DUDE, you still need more solid rhymes. lol


Mah folks is so real, tha flow is so ill , sicker than most, livin in ghost, switchin from coast,
spittin tha dope, rippin ya folks, flyer than tha clouds, on higher amounts,

femcees shook like pilot's in turberlance, dentist rhymes, how i work tha spit
-STuD PHaMoUS

Sick rhyming, plex esk there.

All in Due Time, We Don't Need Ta Coast Phame, All We Do is "Cruise" Lines,
I Stare & Gloat, While You Air Ya Vision I'm A Clear The Smoke,
Trips On Jet Skii's While You Steer The Boat, Creative Minds "illuminate"& Prepare 4 Growth,
Watch em' Open "Blinds", Briefly Meditate & Tear The Rope - Cre@T!Ve
Steer and tear is a weak rhyme.

Overall, solid cypher. I'd like to see another one with better multis from Creative. What you're trying to get away with, as far as rhymes go, its angering because some of us work diligently to have strong rhymes and you're selling your punches short when you try to leave that out of the equation.

Nice cypher though.
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