Loaded

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:06 pm

My flows' dirty like I'm pourin out a mop bucket/
I got punches but my hands do the talkin like a sock puppet/
Stop frontin, Ruckus you don't drop nothin/
Yet these skeptics check my resume like I'm job huntin/
Every verse is perfected til I'm heard and respected/
Its worth the investment, my word's a murderous weapon/
Vets hurtin and stressin til they curse their reflection/
Hatred turns to a question then converts to obsession/
Then they purchase collections and buy hits, they can't deny it/
This man's a riot, I never cut a track I samurai it/
My sword's raw, leave biters with a sore jaw/
Thru the ups and downs, I got more support than a sports bra/
Yall picked the short straw, all the haters quit boastin/
Cuz their flow is the toilet water my latest shit floats in/
Flush it down, clowns can try again another day/
Tryin to be raw but you aint hard enough to make the rubber break/

K KiLLaH · Post by **K KiLLaH** » Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:38 am

W

AH that Shyt is Str8 Fyre

RainMan · Post by **RainMan** » Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:56 am

MOEstradamus · Post by **MOEstradamus** » Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:07 am

this was great man pure fire bro

My flows' dirty like I'm pourin out a mop bucket/
I got punches but my hands do the talkin like a sock puppet/

one of my favorite lines

Yall picked the short straw, all the haters quit boastin/
Cuz their flow is the toilet water my latest shit floats in/

another one

keep dem coming man we need more shit like dis no homo

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:23 pm

The punches were raw.

The flow was good.

The rhyme scheme was very average.

Overall. I liked this piece because it kept me entertained and it didn't try to be something it wasn't.

Phasewon · Post by **Phasewon** » Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:57 pm

dope shit, as usual, multies, flow, punches,
everything was executed nicely. started to fall
off a lil at the end, but nonetheless still a
solid lyrical verse, ill drop.

SacredVerse · Post by **SacredVerse** » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:18 am

I like the flow, it had basic vocab but it was good, had me laughin, epsecially the sock puppet, that was funny as fuck. I'd work on makin ya lines a little longer and better vocab, but it was nice, woulda been a nice corner cipher spit

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Thu Aug 13, 2009 5:27 am

Good Shyt Ruck...

10/10 the whole piece was nice..

treasure · Post by **treasure** » Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:52 am

shit was straight fire..
rolld right off the tounge..
thanks 4 the drop.

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:06 pm

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