Remember Them Days

[QwarterZ]

Picture me, 13 the days I was tryna be a ol' romantic
I know I plan'd shit, slippin' letters into books I'd borrow, so scratch it
out, I know I'm kinda awkward, I don't seem your type
you got no standards, you just turned 14, I seen your nice
I used to dream of life, marriage and all that, I mean it I'd...
contemplate over silly things, why? I don't know maybe it's the video games?
maybe it's music, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, NaS, Final Fantasy anywho wait....
tell me about yourself, I seen you around the school alot lately
I'd like to know what you do for fun, I got time, just a ride I got waiting
see I know you don't see it, but someday I might be the greatest
see these jeans is vapors, they'll disappear if you let em, see I'm playing
I like to joke when I can, a smile could change your views, invest in them
I mean if you don't feel me now, I think we could be the best of friends
it just means I'll be waiting in the wings, until they ready to spread again
I guess that's....arms wide open? that's my creed to a blessin' *ahem*

[FlipSide]

Picture me, 13 the days I was tryna be a ol' romantic
I know I plan'd shit, slippin' letters into books I'd borrow, so scratch it
out, I know I'm kinda awkward, I don't seem your type
you got no standards, you just turned 14, I seen your nice

Not as simple as it reads.. i think its great as far as a conversational Set of bars

tell me about yourself, I seen you around the school alot lately
I'd like to know what you do for fun, I got time, just a ride I got waiting
see I know you don't see it, but someday I might be the greatest
see these jeans is vapors, they'll disappear if you let em, see I'm playing

First two lines u pretend to care and that last line u showed u really a wolf and she lil red riding hood lol

I like to joke when I can, a smile could change your views, invest in them
I mean if you don't feel me now, I think we could be the best of friends
it just means I'll be waiting in the wings, until they ready to spread again

Those last three lines were descent... the lil wings thing was cool... nothing outstanding compared to what u ussually drop.. mostly because of the lack of ur usual word play but as i c it this piece does not need it to stand on its own.1

[Shady_08]

this reminds me of my childhood lol

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Picture me, 13 the days I was tryna be a ol' romantic
I know I plan'd shit, slippin' letters into books I'd borrow, so scratch it
out, I know I'm kinda awkward, I don't seem your type
you got no standards, you just turned 14, I seen your nice
I used to dream of life, marriage and all that, I mean it I'd...
contemplate over silly things, why? I don't know maybe it's the video games?
maybe it's music, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, NaS, Final Fantasy anywho wait....
tell me about yourself, I seen you around the school alot lately

overall decent drop: 7.5/10

[complexity]

I honestly thought the story was demanding of appreciation that it might not of deserved.

I couldn't find a deeper meaning than the surface story that was also boring. Maybe once again it was about hip hop, that's a tired topic, I wasn't feeling the rhyme schemes in particular.

Not seeing many highlights either. I'll give this a 5/10. The beginning had a nice outline for a more interesting story but it fell flat.