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Digestion

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i eat thought and shit lyrical genius
ideas through digestion the myricals seamless
it appears that i'm fiendish you seen it i doubt it
i'm darker than New York durin a power outage
like a sucker punch i'm leavin cowards mouths split
sugin power outlets with the beat of my pulse
i come wit solid structure like a jeep in a roll
a creep is your role while im the master cheif
most rappers cattle ranchers they only capture beef
while im dastard-ly no good call me rotten meat
bought dope from a dealer and what you got was me
that problem weed you cant kill wit your poision
im the real HAzard its me you should be avoiding
im voiding your status for you rap is a bad habbit
paint a picture better than avatar i get mad graphic
so quit rappin you not in style like a plad jacket
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you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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Re: Digestion

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Word dude this was a tight drop i liked how u started the flow was "seamLess" lol...for real tho it was and it seems u drop mostly hard scrips... i would like to see some more topical drops from u tho... i mean the metaphores and punchlines are good the...the ny power outtage line was dope...the jeep role line ...the cattle rancher line...dude u just fuckin full of them tho...cant blame u for realesen them...tight drop tho...technically sound
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This was purdy cool, the only thing I dislike is rhyming lyrical with miracle
I hate that comparison everytime I hear it......well whenever I read it too
either way this was purdy nice my dude you always got yourself writing some shit
keep it up! I'll keep reading!

a creep is your role while im the master cheif
most rappers cattle ranchers they only capture beef
while im dastard-ly no good call me rotten meat
bought dope from a dealer and what you got was me

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I was going to say thats my fave line but quoting it alone should prove that point....keep writing
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upping this shit
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while im dastard-ly no good call me rotten meat
bought dope from a dealer and what you got was me



^^^^^ i liked this man. Everything was ill dawg. I enjoyed readin this

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uppin
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