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It's The Best That I Can Do With A Crappy Studio Hahaha. The Mic Quality is Horrible Amongst Other Things But I Think This Song is Dope. I Also Tried My Best 2 Do The Mixing Myself Lemme Know What Yall Think..
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Quality is not good happy u pointed it out but I could hear ur voice nicely tho which is good so props on dat. I see u used a Common beat I love dat beat man flow was good could've used a lil more emotion but u got skills dawg if u work on ur emotion I think you'll be good overall imma give dis a 7/10. Da words u used on dis was dope I was vibin' 2 it and dats a plus keep dropping man.
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Man if u had a better mic it come off a lot nicer... U got some flow too, i wanna hear the umph... lol what we both seem to be lacking dude..ahaha.. second verse is louder but it sound kinda clear.. A couple bars forced but i got to give u props cuz u spit 3 verses...and the levels fell back into place...this common beat is classic too...u got use of multies in ur audio... its a lil different than text to me.. but u got some work to put in.. i wanna hear this in a studio too... stay droppin my dude.. if u get a better mic we can link up my dude
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Yeah, you gotz a tight flow style homie but wherever you at, you gotta get yourself into a proper studio atmosphere. Keep doing this. I want to hear more so post some ishh soon. Word. Peace.
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aight we'll jus get the quality shit out the way, u already know. as for the track, dope. i liked the vibe to it. beat was a great choice. ya swag is illy man. i really think u can maybe put a lil more emotion in it. not all crazy but jus a lil. the vocab was bonkers dawg. alotta great multies and shit. another thing that would elevate u a bit more, is maybe bein a lil more sure of ur rhymes ya know? like if all ur lyrics dropped on beat, especially wit the shit u had to say, maaaaaaan. shit would blow alot more people away. but for what it is, this is good man. GOOD. jus because i think u know what it takes to make it GREAT. dope shit dawg, dont stop the audio.
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That's Wassup Loon E I Respect That, As 4 Everyone Else Most Def Thanks 4 The Feed I Will Definitely Elevate MYSELF & MY EQUIPMENT..

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Nigga if you lived near me id pay for you to get in the damn studio that shit was dope if it was mixed in mastered itd be rediculous
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yea hurry up and invest in a studio and re-do dis track u got skills man
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You kind of rhyme and dare I say sound like a really white version of Blu.

Keep working on it.
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Post by STUD_PHaMOUS »

Man this coulda been sumptin, you need a better mic or get in a studio fam, i liked it for what it was, i'm surprised you picked a classic like that to jump on tho
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