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Lawgix feat JC Vypa & Lifted 1 - Frustration

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Lawgix feat JC Vypa & Lifted 1
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Beat Produced By Mister KA
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Re: Lawgix feat JC Vypa & Lifted 1 - Frustration

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Its got that laid back, better listen kinda vibe... JC Did his thing, his verse was good, Lawgix always doing his thing, Verse was strong, lyrics were epic, concept was dope, I like the vibe of the beat, Lifted 1 had a sick verse, i like his style he did, he kinda dragged out towards the end like he quickly added a couple lines in there, The hook stood out and was delivered very well, it fit the song, over all its a nice drop..
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Post by FlipSide »

This beat is tight for real.... one thing tho... 1st dude sound kinda low to me... i miss some of the lyrics under the beat.. but got dope delivery... Hook is tight nice voice inflection there..@nd dude got some nice lil flow..kinda midwesternish with the speeding up in the middle of bars.. I like the hook tho.. Lirycs are tight as well.. for all verses too...Nice drop Lawgix.. good quality track here
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Re: Lawgix feat JC Vypa & Lifted 1 - Frustration

Post by STUD_PHaMOUS »

this beat is so fuckin dope, idk what it is lol.. first verse was alright, i've heard worse.. shoulda stepped it up, the hook was pretty decent, second verse was the best of the song, third verse was mad choppy kept falling off.. overall it was decent
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thanx for all the feedback!!! i'll leave feed on ya'lls drops tomorrow... uppin!!!
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Hmmm, Good Shit.
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Post by Darth Vader »

I like the beat, try to work on developing your flow a bit is my suggestion, your lyrics and wordplay are good, you just need to swag it out more homie. Good look tho, keep bangin em out!
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Re: Lawgix feat JC Vypa & Lifted 1 - Frustration

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the beat is iiiiiiiiiiiiiill fa real. i really like it man. great choice. the first dude, mmmm.......was ok. nutn crazy or over the top. kinda jus a normal flow. the hook was proper. dope but not sumtn that would stay stuck in my mind. second dude was dope. i like alot. id say all u guys kinda have that grrrrrr typa delivery. which almost puts u all on the same level, until u really pay attention to the lyrics. the third dude was prolly the best out the 3. delivery, presence, material and all was really good. switched the steez a few times also, and me, im a huge fan of shit like that. overall i liked the track tho. really did. i liked the beat alot man jus thought id say that agin. the production was legit, which is kinda what i expected. dope drop man
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Re: Lawgix feat JC Vypa & Lifted 1 - Frustration

Post by HKX »

KA beat those r always ill 2 mess wit. Law I liked da hook on dis was diggin' it ur verse was good but I felt like u could've put more emotion on ur verse. Wasn't feeling da 1st verse didn't really sound like he wanted 2 do it or was nervous. 3rd verse was aight as well like Stud said it was choppy and dude fell off a lil. Decent drop tho dawg keep doin' ur thing
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

idk what it is but the whole song is kinda bland.... its kinda like u said about some of my tracks "i jus get bored listenin"

vypa verse was weak, flow was very choppy

hook was dope

ur verse was well better than the first by far and had some really good parts (verbal intell will murder at will) lol

hook is dope

lifteds verse was prolly the better of the 3 cuz he was steady wit it

overall this ain the best ive heard from u guys... keep droppin n never stoppin
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