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My Sorrow Begins

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This is a track that i did in the beginning of 09, its an old one but i just found it and decided to put it up, let me know,
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: My Sorrow Begins

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it seems u dug deep on this one.. i like the omotion ur project on the mic tho man.. and the hook is def hot.. nice choppin n mixxin there.. for real..good quotables there by a couple of my favorite rappers.. very emotional drop tho man... u poured ur heart into this one it seems.. i like to see innovation man... ur views on religion and ur approach to your faith are a mountain my dude...stay strong!
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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i liked it fam, this is tha best track i heard from you, maybe it's the emotion behind it, whatever it was, it was nice
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Thanks guys, appreciated... its short but says alot
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: My Sorrow Begins

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I'm Feelin' It.. Gospel Rap.. U Da Truth
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Thanks homie, i gotta fill the gap between christian rap and regular rap and not make them sound different but sound regular with a good message, thats the only rap worth rapping.. stuff thats real
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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The beat is kool, I don't know like the hook though fucks it up for me.

Your flows on point, lyrics are nice, delivery is ill, production is crisp.

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Re: My Sorrow Begins

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This is straight borderline rap, if you can bridge the gap, you've definitely got something here man, keep feedin' that fire, good look.
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Re: My Sorrow Begins

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Thanks for the feed..

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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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