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"All i Need" [STUD PHaMOUS]

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Track for the ladies, feedback is appreciated
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Nice lil track right here.. Flow is dope, delivery was ok... i see the laid back steez.... mix is on point.. Content is dope for those that like this tipe of track...certainly not me... but over all i think ud attract a descent crowd with this.... nice drop
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Thank you guys, i really appreciate the feedback on this track.. it seems to be a crowd favorite lol, but shout outs to y'all for givin me REAL feedback it's all love
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The hook is catchy man, you def on point, your vocals could be a little bit louder, you got good flow, a little bit more energy would be nice, even tho the type of track its a laid back delivery, over all its a good track, Props
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Re: "All i Need" [STUD PHaMOUS]

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Pretty Cool.. I See You've Acquired That Laid Back Flow, Pretty Decent Just Needs A Lil More Emotion in It. But Overall DOPEY Like The Seven Dwarfs
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dis was ill girl u got off on it I was def feeling dis hook is insane as well. Verses were dope 2 I felt da whole track reminded me of my wifey really nice drop Stud keep killin' it.
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this was purdy nice, something about it, either way I'm diggin' your work man
it's like you keep putting in work daily, soon I'll be doing the same thing
keep dropping tracks man
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Blammmm wicked hook on this track no doubt, good rap style I ain't mad at ya manggg just keep pushin this shit out like its nothin, you're on the right path. Big upz and Bless.
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shout outs to everybody that gave me feedback, i appreciate the love & respect
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Re: "All i Need" [STUD PHaMOUS]

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i can dig this one, if you could raise the level of your voice a little bit. ... the hook is pretty catchy... good job!

p.s. How old are you?
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