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To the eye untrained ya focus remains Contained
A thing to be molded ta shape..In ways like Clay
A figure of speech? Some say it may in life relate
End game In Light we May Notice If We Died Today
A bit too late to say u wisened when u passed away
In Scrips I do Portray My ingnorence In Blissfull ways
But in equal traits Admit ...my Minds Gift Like In A/A
Progress From This one Day Add To My Words Weight
Ta Slash in the worse way The Face That Adversed Me
With a Verse That Converses with the Matter of Corpses
Like Witches That Work With The Ghost Of the horsemen
Then Ending Endorsin With The Tip Of A Foreskin
The Spit Of A Dickhead That Wasted Its Knowledge
Absorb Ya Brain Throbbage Like Falsified Profets
That Are Spitting For Profits & They Message Is Nothing

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BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Post by eMCee Havic »

dope drop i like the fluid of the rhymes and how intertwined they were the first 3 bares set it off for me

awesome drop man you seem to be elevating your writtens which in turn will elevate your audios keep droppin homie
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Flip You Always Start GREAT & Then... You Just Leave A Nigga Hangin'? Where's The Rest of The Drop? Lmaoo I Would Like 2 See The Rest Though..
A bit too late to say u wisened when u passed away
In Scrips I do Portray My ingnorence In Blissfull ways
But in equal traits Admit ...my Minds Gift Like In A/A
Progress From This one Day Add To My Words Weight
This Sparked My Interest Then I Kept Reading Until..
Blah Blah Blah..
WTF DID YOU MAKE A SAMMICH!! Lmaooo Great Drop n Kept Elevating Just Finish Your Piece n It'll Be Another Flipside Classic!!
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Post by JDR »

Some of the nicest stuff you've dropped IMO.

A bit too late to say u wisened when u passed away
In Scrips I do Portray My ingnorence In Blissfull ways

Nice deep bar. Loved the way it was laid out.

Like Witches That Work With The Ghost Of the horsemen
Then Ending Endorsin With The Tip Of A Foreskin

Liked the flow in this bar.

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klean flow.. guud multies..
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