crimson vs 360(3-0 crimson)

[360]

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House Rules
due.. 24 hours after crim checks in..

check..

i got a question, bro. what kinda man names himself the same color as a menstrual flow ?
crimson.. the same asshole that's the butt of every rectal joke

so you know this prick'll never blow, unless he's jackin' off to male centerfolds
i heard this faggot loves skiin' just because he gets ta grip a set a poles

i don't know what crims on, but knowin' him, he didn't take it orally
but his bars put in work.. literally, cuz they're a fuckin' chore ta read

i'll smack * crimson backwards * and make this bastard show respect with * no smirc * ( smirk )
cuz he's talkin' to me in the wrong tone like I'm Clem in Joe Dirt ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YmMRaUX-QSM )

fuck this arrogant bitch. i'll lift his skirt and see a crimson colored pad in his slit
so the only time he's spittin' hot shit is when he fucks up waxin' his lip

[crimson]

Well put it this way.. the way I see it, the best I could do is tie in this battle.. It's whatever. I take losses with a grain of salt..

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i NEED CONFESS, I showed up in hopes of facing a DECENT THREAT // but then I looked at his record & I admit i'm INDEED IMPRESSED,..... cause If u take losses with a grain of salt, then you TRULY are a “well SEASONED” VET

Its no MENTAL LAPSE, since I know most ‘o y’all expected a XBOX punch in my INTROS RAP // but this idiots not THAT advance, so all he’s getting is a NINTENDO SLAP//

If my VERBAL’S ASTOUNDING , just wait till I beat ‘em blue & PURPLE & POUND ‘EM // I should be cocky !!, look at his name, even HE expects me to rap CIRCLES AROUND “EM

To be HONEST, IT'S DONE, homie….fuck a battle, use LOGIC & RUN // guess
It makes sense all ya verses are riddled with gay bars… as many times as you’ve been SPOTTED IN ONE

You’re online a lot!!!, why's it so hard to FIND A DATE???…..oops MY MISTAKE….I guess ya record & username fits RIGHT IN PLACE as your way of telling us all ya HEIGHT & WEIGHT (5’8 360)

[$eR!oU$ SK!LL]

360
i got a question, bro. what kinda man names himself the same color as a menstrual flow ?
crimson.. the same asshole that's the butt of every rectal joke

Ehh, wasn't much of a hit. It almost landed but in my opinion it fell short

so you know this prick'll never blow, unless he's jackin' off to male centerfolds
i heard this faggot loves skiin' just because he gets ta grip a set a poles

Naw, the gay references never hit hard to me unless you got some proof or something.
Didn't make much sense either. I really dont undestand where you were gettin with that

i don't know what crims on, but knowin' him, he didn't take it orally
but his bars put in work.. literally, cuz they're a fuckin' chore ta read

Ehh, another one them puches falling short

i'll smack * crimson backwards * and make this bastard show respect with * no smirc * ( smirk )
cuz he's talkin' to me in the wrong tone like I'm Clem in Joe Dirt ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YmMRaUX-QSM )

Ehh, kinda funny skit, but I never really cracked a smile at the punch

fuck this arrogant bitch. i'll lift his skirt and see a crimson colored pad in his slit
so the only time he's spittin' hot shit is when he fucks up waxin' his lip

I dont know if the crimson nameplay should have been your primary attack in this battle.
The set up made me crack a lil smile, but once again the punch never landed.
I think this bar should have been switched around.
The set up being the punch, and the punch being the set up............................................................................................................................................................
crimson

i NEED CONFESS, I showed up in hopes of facing a DECENT THREAT // but then I looked at his record & I admit i'm INDEED IMPRESSED,..... cause If u take losses with a grain of salt, then you TRULY are a “well SEASONED” VET

Barz pritty stretched. but it landed a nice lil hit at the end.

Its no MENTAL LAPSE, since I know most ‘o y’all expected a XBOX punch in my INTROS RAP // but this idiots not THAT advance, so all he’s getting is a NINTENDO SLAP//

Ehh, dont like that bar, and its also stretched

If my VERBAL’S ASTOUNDING , just wait till I beat ‘em blue & PURPLE & POUND ‘EM // I should be cocky !!, look at his name, even HE expects me to rap CIRCLES AROUND “EM

Lol, good hit with the nameplay. The opener was a lil forced tho.

To be HONEST, IT'S DONE, homie….fuck a battle, use LOGIC & RUN // guess
It makes sense all ya verses are riddled with gay bars… as many times as you’ve been SPOTTED IN ONE

lol, now I said I dont favor the gay references, But this wasn't gay like that.
You wasn't talkin bout fucked in the butt and shit like that.
That was a really clever punch


You’re online a lot!!!, why's it so hard to FIND A DATE???…..oops MY MISTAKE….I guess ya record & username fits RIGHT IN PLACE as your way of telling us all ya HEIGHT & WEIGHT (5’8 360)

LMAO. Good closer.

O.K
360,
You had good ideas and your structure was well put together.
You kept all of your bars at an equal length and your multis were decent.
The only thing you were lacking was the most inportant, Punches.
A verse full of multis will never win a verse full of punches.
It may have won against another verse full of multis.
And the golden rule of battling homey, Never use gay references in the way that you were {Talkin bout dudes jackin off and shit} Those lines are never gonna cut it.
Seems ya need to work on your approach more.
Maybe hit some tutorials online.
Be Eazy
Crimson,
Your punches are landing for the most part.
I once had a dude tell me that a stretched verse can win battles every time if it is full of punches.
I din't believe him till now.
I would still work on the structure though.
If you fixed your stretched lines and added the new improvement with your already flawless punches, you'd be a vets worst nightmare.


Good battle, but Crimson had the punches all the way through and that took the W
MVGT Crimson

[Arvincible]

damn im liking this crimson dude, his delivery is super on point, nice word choice and syntax.

360.. ur not bad either, u just didnt really match up in this one..

punches - crimson
personals - crimson
flow - crimson
gay jokes - 360

2-0 crimson

[JDR]

nice battle

punches - crimson
personals - crimson
flow - crimson
vote - crimson

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You’re online a lot!!!, why's it so hard to FIND A DATE???…..oops MY MISTAKE….I guess ya record & username fits RIGHT IN PLACE as your way of telling us all ya HEIGHT & WEIGHT (5’8 360)

That shit killed it right there.

360 - You spit a nice verse. Flow was on point, punches were decent. Crim juss got ya on this one homie..

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[360]

i appreciate the feedback and the prompt votes.. congrats, crim, cuz i just got knocked the fuck out

[K KiLLaH]

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