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Reminds me of Atmosphere, I'm diggin' it tho'
the flow was cool, can't wait to hear it.
I think the 2nd verse was the high point for me
the rest was cool tho', the hook got that addictive vibe to it
the next question is............what beat you using? lulz
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QwarterZ wrote:the next question is............what beat you using? lulz
that was my main question lol
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Cause the whole truth turned into the cold truth
Does his touch warm your heart when he holds you?
Listen baby, yo you need to find some clarity
Don't manipulate my feelings, that ain't fair to me
I Would like To Hear It...Had Some Nice Lineage in there... but i must insist on at least a lil word play... Maybe not...i might be wrong...but i would love to hear it....
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: Potential audio?

Post by NoVeL »

Yo Catch YOU MUST Post This in Audio.. But First Get A Mic

Here's My Favorite Parts in The Drop
You're the only girl I ever gave my soul to
Always honest, I meant every word I told you
You had me runnin barefoot wearin no shoes
You broke the news over the phone- I had no clue
I woke up from a dream- saw his face
You were naked in his bed he was takin my grace
Wouldn't tell me his name he said it wasn't my place
Three days in a row, know that ain't a mistake
So how'd his dick feel, how'd his lips taste?
Did you meet him at a frat party shitfaced?
I Can Feel The Tension Here.. Don't Worry Bro Ya Not The Only One, They Always Seem 2 Do This
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