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Mixtape track I dropped a while ago..take it in famz..
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This is Serious.. I Wanna Hear More!!
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Beats is mad wicked yo very ill something I'd kill, verses were dope as well. I actually wasn't feeling the hook on this felt like it could've used more on it. I also didn't like da effect u put on the hook didn't go wit it 4 me but again dats jus me dawg. Ur presence on da mic is getting better as well so dats a good thing. I look 4 presence when it comes 2 tracks being dropped in da chamber. Presence is a big thing 4 me if I don't feel it 2 me it's jus not dat good. Keep dropping tho man so good so far keep up the motivation as well.
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This was actually purdy cool
got a nice flow, a sick beat
feels different but gots that vibe

keep doin' you my dude!
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much respect fellaz, I appreciate the feedback so far..
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Another good drop, you got good taste in beats, liking what i hear so far, your presence is there, you got that, lyrics are strong, hooks aint your specialty but you will grow in that, you got what it takes man, just member raps written and rapped from the heart are always the killers
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Re: The Business

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Darth Wtf Dude...U Nasty sun.. Hook is ok.. nice mixx but the flow and delivery are Def on point..... This beat hits hard ... where u from? just wanna put a place on this style u got...sounds kinda up north to me... Nothingmuch else to say other than its fucking fire my dude
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Re: The Business

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Much respect brotha...I'm from Toronto, Canada. Like we say up here, Hip Hop Ain't Dead, It Lives In The North. Feel me? Thanks again for the luv homie I appreciate it.
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