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A Re-Introduction

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I'm Mentally upset at your lyrical failure at text,
your audio's faulty, a mess, instrumental's callin' who's next?
A real baller I guess, systematically eat or digest
competition, it's missing, so mathmatically yes he's the best
Unless the crest of a wave, sways and lays on his chest
the ney/nay-sayers can't check him, like they got no knights playing chess
they claim they're the best, but their vocabulary is wrecked
they sending Blackberry text from oceans and still have no depth
I'm not saying I'm perfect, but your worthless attempts
offend like sin to this Prince so much I've surfaced again
To curve from the trend of lacking facts when you rap
practice is crack, I'm an addict, til I'ma classic on tracks
A big bad wolf, need no pack, you mass of lice just get sprayed
exterminating the wack cuz a sacrifice must be made
I've crushed every lame by dusting webs off a page
the oldest stuff that I've saved is colder than any ice age


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I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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Re: A Re-Introduction

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I'm Mentally upset at your lyrical failure at text,
your audio's faulty, a mess, instrumental's callin' who's next?
A real baller I guess, systematically eat or digest
competition, it's missing, so mathmatically yes he's the best
Unless the crest of a wave, sways and lays on his chest
the ney/nay-sayers can't check him, like they got no knights playing chess
they claim they're the best, but their vocabulary is wrecked
they sending Blackberry text from oceans and still have no depth
I'm not saying I'm perfect, but your worthless attempts
offend like sin to this Prince so much I've surfaced again
To curve from the trend of lacking facts when you rap
practice is crack, I'm an addict, til I'ma classic on tracks
A big bad wolf, need no pack, you mass of lice just get sprayed
exterminating the wack cuz a sacrifice must be made
I've crushed every lame by dusting webs off a page
the oldest stuff that I've saved is colder than any ice age
I think this was my favorite part...... Comin at dudes hard with this piece
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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damm this was nice had a smooth flow to it, the vocabulary was above par, many could say it was good but my vocab levels are high sorry no judgement on you haha yeah this was nice had some good punches to it and i liked the flow of it overall keep doin ya thing man
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: A Re-Introduction

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Preciate the feed.
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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Re: A Re-Introduction

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i Liked Every Line Apart From The Last One Lol. i Like Reading Writtens With an Unorthodox Structure if i Can Catch The Flow But i Had No Problems With That. Cool Perspective And Ways Of Saying Things Like The Dust Off The Page Line, Couple Good Punches Too i Was Feeling The Knights One. Keep Droppin.
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