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My Inner Demon

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somethin i did awhile back
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yo sym re-upload ur track into an mp3 cuz I can't play it dawg
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i uploaded it as an MP3 its ready to be listened too... i'll leave feed later on it...
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beat is ok....quality is low.... vocals are low...but u got some flow from what i can hear and make out... i do not like the deep voice thing at all it takes a lot from ur flow man...... u got some flow so i would like to listen to it develop...nice lil story too
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yeah this was okay man... coulda done better with the EQ's and the timing was a bit off with some of the verses... iuno its still hard to have a convo with urself on a track... haha... like the concept of the song... hook was cool... sound quality is a bit better doesn't sound like ur spittin in a kitchen anymore... which is a plus... over all i'll give it a 7.5/10 for the effort and the concept of the song and the hook... good shit... nice to see u back... and i like how u lowered the dubs on the very end of the song...
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Sym nice drop dawg I liked wat u did wit da track quality is not bad either sounded better then ur prev stuff. Beat was ill and da hook went hard. I'm telling you dawg u need 2 start droppin' more songs in da chamber stop snoozin' man I give this an 8/10 the whole conversation back and forth did it for me man haha.
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appreciate the feed guys.... yeah i have been sleepin on hiphop the last few months... but im still here..

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