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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FC-Kos_b1sE

Silence befell, as shadows bellow and howl
Hello? Tell those of the fall we are disemboweld
spittin' blood of the foul, get us a crown
a cap and a gown, let us sleep tonight, NOW!!!!!
there's a spectre, a menace and a Jester
a ghoul, a crossdresser, and a Ripper together
dancing investors screaming of the coinage
I can't avoid it, the streets are a annoyance
they're smiling upside down with a heckle
strip'd the hydes you can call them Jekyll's
a professional can get anythin' cuz their special
a sickness that can't be described it's a devil
a spectacle, minus the vision of the sane
deranged, the spectral is in the flame of the veins
STRANGE, the game is upside down with this arrange....
ment...it's in the veins, vanity that's enraged
a sickness....somethin' that's not described in plain
SIGHT...I'ma hater of light, the darkness the plague
the hatred, the love, the same...the same...the same

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a professional can get anythin' cuz their special
a sickness that can't be described it's a devil
a spectacle, minus the vision of the sane
deranged, the spectral is in the flame of the veins
Honestly i would have quoted the whole thing cuz this was not only on topic the whole way..as it always is..but the flow and multieas and metas and all that was on point..put in the right places and nothing forced in my eyes...i would have to say this is one of the best pieces i seen from u..and the pic was great cuz it put me in that era...Touches a few things from that period...Just plain...I unno...Sickeness...Da plague... for real i will read it again later when im not at work...
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fucking dope!! i think this is best verse out of ur written bro n keep it up
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nice im gon go read more from u. this is really good. y title it as dope show

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