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Re: Feeling 'Fresh-Man', Feeling 'XXL'.

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I Love This Drop, Absolutely Astonishing. You've Been Kinda Absent From The Site Rugged But As Far As I Can See.. This Hasn't Stop You From Elevating. Enjoyed A Couple Parts of The Drop But Here's What Stuck Out 2 Me!!
Keep em above water so you'll always have something to "wave to", "good-bye love"//
Chasing destiny so no more rose pedals, come to my room the trails gonna look like blood//
Better be careful, start "pulling on my jacket" n' the whole hood might come//
Bitch the strongest will survive, fuck the ones who say "the good die young"//
That Was "The Flu" Right There. Fucking Dope!!
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Re: Feeling 'Fresh-Man', Feeling 'XXL'.

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This is my inner child saying "sorry asswipe, I'm on some grown shit"//
I've realized that some people don't need a second chance, all they need is a second wind//
So Imma get that bread, make a toast, let records dance n' give fantasy a little flesh n' skin//
Better be careful, start "pulling on my jacket" n' the whole hood might come//
Bitch the strongest will survive, fuck the ones who say "the good die young"//

couple nice subjects touched here...i see u put more emphasis on the meaning ..givin way to structure..but the deepness of it makes up more than it takes...enjoy immersing my self into this lil world u paint...always a good read...1up
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Re: Feeling 'Fresh-Man', Feeling 'XXL'.

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this was purdy dope, nice to see you droppin'
you always got some interesting shit to say
which I enjoy it's not always the same thing
but sometimes it is...but on a different vibe
always a nice read...keep it up....viagra
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