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rare grenades

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this ones got a strange flow to it if you get it awesome if not... than blah


inspiration under contamination and patience is long gone along with with flagrance
this haven is crumblin with every bass hit face it your only here for the day shift
i can waste shit or build or like a mason Caucasian refusing to spit in laments
terms for these germs underground they just worms eating and shittin our words
if this does occur slap um and leave um on the, ditch or the curve bitches get served
so this is the bird dropin shit on you herbs like seagulls over weed plants
yall need a re-vamp yours flows seem to be in relapse maybe new ideas need to be hatched
see me smashed? no not now or later i got crowds of haters for these miles of flavor
your childish prayers wont save ya when i slay ya fuck venom i spit acidic vapors
i'm bashin your face up with the amps in the bass subs words slashing thru your pay stubs
yes i'm sharp evil so hence its dark you better prepare to defend a shark
your friends are marked and its only a matter of time till this ll end wit scars
with the blend of harps i serenade soothing but dropping rare grenades
you stare enraged cause i'm lyrical sick while you just had a flair of AIDS
i'm a bear in freys so dont think gonna push me even in the AIR I STAY
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Post by complexity »

Let me start off by saying that this was leaps and bounds better than the last few drops. If nothing simply for the more difficult rhyming and the vocabulary being back at the level I've become accustomed to from you.
Modern Defiance wrote:this ones got a strange flow to it if you get it awesome if not... than blah


inspiration under contamination and patience is long gone along with with flagrance
this haven is crumblin with every bass hit face it your only here for the day shift

[Nice. I really think that could have setup for a dope punch, I'm still feeling it though.]

i can waste shit or build or like a mason Caucasian refusing to spit in laments
terms for these germs underground they just worms eating and shittin our words
if this does occur slap um and leave um on the, ditch or the curve bitches get served

[This is alright, enjoyed the inners]

so this is the bird dropin shit on you herbs like seagulls over weed plants

[I hate any type of metaphor like this, others might like it.]

yall need a re-vamp yours flows seem to be in relapse maybe new ideas need to be hatched

[Good one, new ideas need to be hatched and old ones not rehashed]

see me smashed? no not now or later i got crowds of haters for these miles of flavor
your childish prayers wont save ya when i slay ya fuck venom i spit acidic vapors

[Good enough]

i'm bashin your face up with the amps in the bass subs words slashing thru your pay stubs

[This is the bar that I noticed in the first time through that made me read it again immediately]

yes i'm sharp evil so hence its dark you better prepare to defend a shark
your friends are marked and its only a matter of time till this ll end wit scars

[Slightly discombobulated. I really think using all of them same words them two bars could have been a lot better.]

with the blend of harps i serenade soothing but dropping rare grenades
you stare enraged cause i'm lyrical sick while you just had a flair of AIDS
i'm a bear in freys so dont think gonna push me even in the AIR I STAY

[Nice]
I noticed a few areas for improvement. I tried to point them out. I thought this piece was more awe inspiring than your recent efforts. With a name like "Modern Defiance", you've got to work hard to live up to that moniker.
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Re: rare grenades

Post by Borat »

Smooth man. Like plex said it is a bit messy in spots but nothing a little touch up couldn't fix, Even though I don't really think it NEEDS it. I would like to see a topical from you.

Anyways. Here is my favorite part

"I'm bashin your face up with the amps in the bass subs words slashing thru your pay stubs"

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Post by FlipSide »

Damndude..this shit was supa lyrical ....nahh for real tho the multies and the flow were sick... it seems u at a level a lil higher.. Mad vocan and it fit well with all....Again i like reading ur drops...gives me a lil elevation
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Post by trubblecleff »

i liked the extended bars. had some really hot lines in there i agree about the birds and weed line not only was it a stretch to make it work but its rookie compared to the rest of this piece . it was nice
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Post by QwarterZ »

Modern....smh...this was nice
I'm diggin' the vibe and the whole thing
very smooth work once again....keep doin' you my dude


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