It's all simple

[R.E.I.]

Well I landed in the summer up on 26th ave
Where there was very little stressin and it wasn't so bad
When I was more concerned with my yo-yo and the chess club
Than how to get some mo' dro and the next buzz
Shells from cooper, shrooms for extra lives
Cannons got you high, and a nine was just my bed time
Coke was cola, partys meant slumber
Mary Jane was just a name and a forty was just a number
When I went to parks often and not to get drunk
And if I needed a sack it was... just for lunch
At.. 7 AM poppin Flinstone vitamins
Instead of my friends on ecstasy and vicadin
If life is planned, then it's just so hectic
With all the pressures tryna fit into the tetris

And if I could, I would change my ways
Cause it was all so good just back in the day

Every day livin just anotha adolescent
Confessin my ability the second that I stepped in
Fightin out my mothers womb, exercisin my fists
With dad and brother in the room cryin and shit... whatever
Skippin at school meant jumpin over the sandbox
Until I learned a little bit older is how a man talks
Only thing that was tight was the training wheels on my bike
Tried to be like the elders, had to form a new life
Shoulda told myself to slow down, you're movin towards hell
Proof was in the puddin, seen people smokin green then I'd tell
As my innocence assorted all the sentiments we acted devilish
feelin kinda jumpy like illegal immigrants
Over borders of obsession
From sports to the sessin
From new friends to fake ones
I musta missed the message
But that's life and that's right
And after all that's left
Feel the end as far I'm concerned I'm holdin my breath

And it was all- all- all so great just
Back-Back-Back in the day

[FlipSide]

Shells from cooper, shrooms for extra lives
Cannons got you high, and a nine was just my bed time
Coke was cola, partys meant slumber
Mary Jane was just a name and a forty was just a number
When I went to parks often and not to get drunk
And if I needed a sack it was... just for lunch

good way of using todays words on a context that is innocent

good emo drop... feeling was there..tho u couldve used more word play and a couple metas i still c what u did there...keep droppin kid...and feeding on everyones drops to increase the feed on urs

[trubblecleff]

i liked this the first verse i think gave the feelin u wanted the second seemed like u were stretchin to stay on point like it wasnt natural i like the hook makes me wanna do something for it keep it up man i would like to see a revised version if u feel that its needed

[QwarterZ]

this actually sounds like it should be a song
it's got that format and that vibe
which makes this enjoyable, but it just needs to be heard
a lot of good introspect on things, keep writing my dude!