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a once broken man now stands in defiance
warlords rage over his lack of compliance
they hope for riots rightfully fearing the silence
because the lambs are only quiet in the land of the lions...
one fist from the heart put to the sky
can begin the end of the people on high
theyve requested our allegiance
but i will not can not never will comply ...
we now shed the shackles and spread our wings
we were bred for battle bearing led for kings
weve yet to set saddles for the hell we'll bring
their walls will rattle and our dead will sing
their world will tremble their grounds run red
the dust wont settle till theyve all been bled
women and children are not to be touched
maybe theyll see the future is us

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This was actually purdy hot my dude I'm suprised no one read it
I like the way you wrote it, it's like a story or somethin' more
I'm feelin' it cuz you could visualize what your saying
my only problem is you didn't write more, but you really did your thing
keep writing my dude you coming up in the game!
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thank u mayne
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damn this shit was too good props bro
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ty mayne much appreciated
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