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MY MUSIC VIDEO

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wasnt feelin that hook no no no, but the lyrics were dope well done guys

-- Sun May 30, 2010 9:38 pm --

and props on bein from Wales good win guys hah
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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kay i can see millions of things wrong with this video... and the over all song... first off the chorus sucks like Messiah said... the girl can't sing honestly shoulda just kept the original chorus line in there... IE Bruno Mars... the beat quality was kinda crappy but the mixing of the vocals were decent... now on to the video... wtf? u guys are all sitting on a rock together... i thought u guys were gay for a minute... then u start talkin about chicks... coulda had one girl in there and u 3 coulda been tryin to get with her with ur verses... kinda like how Michael Jackson and Paul McCartney did with The Girl Is Mine... but newayz... off topic... the video was weird n kinda strange man... the song was okay... nothin really too great... but you all did ur thing with the lyrics... so all in all i give this a 5.5/10 cuz of the effor of the lyrics but the chorus and the video were throwin me off... take it how u want it...
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Appreciate the honesty.

The singer is a good friend of mine, i went to school with her and she was busy when we shot the video so we decided to just do a quick video and release it because the song is getting played out and all our other songs we release are allways slideshows. which isnt interesting. I agree with all the feedback, needed a girl there to make it fit the topic, but was quick video, shot in about 2hours, only so we move to the next level of music ya know.. thanks for the feedback, appreciate it
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