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Re: Flocabulary - Joey Piff & Mutual

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Cee4 wrote:Joey Piff`s verse was cool. flowed perfectly and had some nice punchlines.

i cant believe how much mutual has improved. the vocab is very impressive but you overdone it. im not the most intelligent but im far from dumb and i didnt get a lot of that verse. id bet 90% of readers would be the same if their honest. as i said its impressive and im jealous of your knowledge of vocab (or dictionary reading skills) but it kinda makes it difficult to take anything from your verse.
Just To Say Even If It Was Dictionary Reading Skills Now I Know What they All Mean Cus I Would've Had To Look'em Up No Beef Jus Saying
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Flocabulary - Joey Piff & Mutual

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dam tight....aint seen yall drop too much...would like to see more..and damn with the vocab on that second verse
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aiight thanks mayne i'll return feed now dude
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Dude this was an EXCELLENT drop. vocab, multis, and metaphors out of control! Mutual did much better than joey piff but it's koo he had some good punches
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Re: Flocabulary - Joey Piff & Mutual

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thanks for the feed Catch will return now
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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