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Umm... excuse me miss but... I think your hearts showing.
May I suggest closing your chest?
If you keep it open, it may be best to invest-in somthin to kill the infection...
Cause its spreadin.

Your love is sickening, found a home in depression.
You let your wrist bleed and scar over to make an impression...
Alright I get it, your days a mess inertangled with tension.
This place has got you stressin, so you slit your wrist to relieve some aggression...

don't tell me its self medication.
I've felt the hurt that swells inside when you hate your reflection.
You opened your skin, on a search for beauty within...
You came up empty when you realized it was there on your skin.

You never know what you have untill the veins run dry.
She finished the job, in the bathtub on her search for god.
Died cold, december 1st 1995

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whoa deep conception n easy reading
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eeesh. all bad. but the flow was siiiick. deep. but u always droppin some "worth the read" typa shit. keep it movin dawg. u coooooold bloooooded.
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Haha word thanks for the feed boys

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nahh for real this shit was "made to look easy" but its not easy makin it look easy...wait...yeah thats what i meant.... I would quote but then id quote the whole thing.... Big ups man...i would like to read more of ur shit dunn
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