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My movement

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Something quick..wrote yesterday spit today at work b-4 my porter got here lol..please feed tho
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beat was cool for what you where spittin about.. equipment seems a lil cheap it seemed like your voice was idk how to say it like staticy eco to it in places nice flow fell off a few times... im not a very good person at criticin audio so mabye others will give better help
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When I hear the title I'm like ewwwww

but this was dope my dude! how long it take?
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an hour to write and bout 20 minutes to spit once i smoked n drank a beer....not at all up to my old standards but i gotta start somewhere
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this was okay... flow was consistent lyrics were good... i can hear u need elevation on recording equipment... beats a lil bit loud and drowns u out... u really need a new mic haha... the static is annoying... but over all this was pretty good... just up ya game on the equipment bro n u'll be good to go... its aaallllll about quality...
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yo u stepped ya game up much props keep progressing i see you nigga
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Laid back beat ..nice lil sample in there..
flo is pretty on..lots of transfers east coast style....you know about that quality ish so i'll skip dat part..
any way i say it's decent for a quik write keep doin ya thing..
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I like This. It's A Feel Good Positive Vibe.
Flow And Lyrics Were Pretty Good.
For The Audio Quality, Production Was Good. You Did What You Had To.
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thanks for the peepin this out fellas... I know i need a better mic and i wont ..(hopefully) make yall hear my shitty quality anymore as im lookin to upgrade soon.. I think imma stick to this style cuz i did not get much positive feed from my other ones...I will when i get my vocab and mic precense up tho..I will return the favor..as always..1up
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this was nice, the beat was good, laid back type, the flow stayed consistent, i know all these points have been made, and the quality, yadda yadda, as soon as you get the better mic drop sumin i think it could get good levels of feed and it'll be a good listen keep droppin my dude
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right off the back i see me bumping this on a beach just chilling, i like mapped out your whole music video to this man lol, your voice just something bout it that fits the beats you bringing to the table, lyrics are nice, you need hooks man lol, but this is nice, i like your flow, i think we would do good on a track, like a track bout how life and rights in them and hardships we get over, i think that would bedope... but good track man.. Keep bringing that heat
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hey deciple that sounds like a good idea man...we should def get up on the PM when u get studio up
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Re: My movement

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i love this beat!, that sample is so dope! i know if you had better equipment, things would be alot better for you, i still loved it for what it was tho
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Re: My movement

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Yo what's the name of this beat?

As for the song, I'm not feeling it. I love the beat, but i think ya quality ruined it though.. Ya Lyrics don't sound bad, but i just don't find my self listening to THIS version from you..

But what's the name of this beat? Somebody tell me
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