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Re: Bringin it back? Just some hip-hop

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i feel ya style.. bring back hip hop that what i really want.. i enjoy ur feed n i feel that.. check my work out some time ayy
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Pretty decent. I could see this on the beat so good flow.
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Re: Bringin it back? Just some hip-hop

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In Normandy Park, where the old are raised
they said man chris mckinney kinda cold to play
they said man chris mckinney got the flow for days
and when he go, try to hold, cause he slows ya brain,
and when you say that you motherfuckin know the name
i get the feelin, just the opposite of novocaine
and im trained to another so i told the train
to go stay with another cause hes holdin weight
Cocaine kinda hot, but im cold today
I told the cops that Im done and Im over game
and by game what I mean is Im an older age
Gotta clean up my behavior cause I told ya mayne
Im in college now kinda gotta board (bode) the plane
i said yeah my life was fun it was the road to chains
to get locked up all day every day id rather stay
inside a school and have fun with my brotha on a sunny day
so anyway now im a-bout money legit
Ill study hard until it fuckin feels funny to sit
Im up next in the lineup and Im comin to hit
till I get home Ill touch the plate like I was runnin this shit

^^^^^^^^^^^that really stuck out to me
very nice flow on this part

the rest was cool, but I really liked this part
either way I see where you were going with this...
keep writing my dude, you got some skills worth reading


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Re: Bringin it back? Just some hip-hop

Post by citizenslain »

Yup, like fuck ya if you trippin
Me and all my hoes bout to start a new religion

that right there was ill. but i agree with everyone else man the third verse was the biggest building block in this drop right here. overall very reader friendly though

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bump for my lil dog dog
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