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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/new-y ... 16401.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/anoth ... 16332.html

Is it lust cuz i hug the mic the way i rub N fuck
Love is lost cuz im leaving after i Bust this nut
But in my mind it calls vivid visions cause a wet dream
Stressing my elevated blessings when adressing
Got me shackeld up in its webbing no key ta release me
Im beastin like fuckin the game up is what its needing
My mics veins gives no feedback when my verse relapse
Into this rehab cuz im iller then pheens act when i spit raps
Is she mines or is it visions of the blind ta sedate the refined
state of the union we have one side, lust for the love of rap
hip hop... she never gave back the way i love my fans
The plan is 'scrapped' but she kept me collected like 'cans'
Refined but rejected my plans ta get turned in for this cash
But in the back burner i stash what ya mic held in its bag
packaged ta hook em fast like coke turned inta crack
Its not knowledge they lack but the will to accept the facts
that even in garbage they find the shine of a gem ta flash
But im after this cheese and and she sprung on me this trap
Never the rat so i plotted and spotted the flaws of acts
and matched the match ta burn its right ta sign afta the X
If my shackles fit then im gonna be the best wearing it
No bake n toss pies ta ya face ta waste fake niggas,they frost
No time for the cost ghostwriting for niggas thats lost
But the bitch got me stuck when mistook what was love for lust
Love the lust but never trust those thats closest to us ....

Fuck it it seems everytime i write i just key... it just ends up being one train of thought
please lemme know how shitty it was lol
Last edited by FlipSide on Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Lust

Post by Loon E Lou »

shit was kuu dawg. u started on topic, kinda flew off on a tangent, but then came back ok. the funny part was that i can actually hear u spittin this. the words u DID lay down had sum type of relevency. so in one way or another, it was on topic. ur a smart writer pimpin. but for key, fuck it, thats usually how they turn out. at least u didnt throw 2pac in it. hahahaha. not horrible, but it didnt show too much of ur creativity like ive heard before. ku drop regardless
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