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Behind The Mask Snippet.

Expand your artistic ability through poetry and story telling. Poetry has been given new life ever since the inception of hip hop. Relax for a minute and explore your poetic side here.

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Borat
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Re: Behind The Mask Snippet.

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Dude your vision in this is sick! Your good at stories I really like your poetry man. I'm on my phone so I can't put up qoutes but there really are alotta dope ones in this. Good read man I love reading your drops keep em comin son

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WTF.... i am on stuck mode right now. there was a few parts that gave me a chill.
All in all it was a pretty powerfull piece. very realistic. In the middle i got a feeling of helplessness like she was being forced into her lifestyle unknowingly.
it dont gotta be summer for me to come up north with da birds~Murda for bricks
or Murda by numbers WHEN i Point the 1-2 gauges tre' or fo-five at ya six
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Damn man...this was hella long

but it was worth the read
it's like reading about the inner workings
aswell as viewing the world at hand
well...that's the interpretation I got

keep writing......when you get out....?

or whatever?
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