i meant to leave feed on this earlier but i didnt get to finish because i WANTED to leave work.
there is alot of food for thought and quotables but the begining had me a bit disoriented. the last to paragraphs put me in focus. i like your use of metas in this piece and that last para was def full of knowledge on some Common shit.
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it dont gotta be summer for me to come up north with da birds~Murda for bricks
or Murda by numbers WHEN i Point the 1-2 gauges tre' or fo-five at ya six
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or Murda by numbers WHEN i Point the 1-2 gauges tre' or fo-five at ya six
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ummm ruggz, good job, i m gotta help ya on chorus lol cos since i m good at it so lemme think a good for that

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Yo ruggz its sick! I love the emotion that's put into this!! Makes me wanna write one kinda like it, but anyways good rap man I would like to hear this to a beat.
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This was purdy dope reminds me of some stuff I would get on
then again I've strayed far from that path
this is purdy dope tho, really got some nice bars
really keepin' the emotion alive in this! keep writing my dude!
then again I've strayed far from that path
this is purdy dope tho, really got some nice bars
really keepin' the emotion alive in this! keep writing my dude!
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This must be some of the best if read since i came to this site...for real... lots of imagery and emotion...topic is the shit cuz we can all relate..... For real im not technical so i cant speak on it but from an uneducated eyes stand poing this shit is really hot bro...Uppin
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Walking around with dry elbows, trying to make a rose outta handful of dirt n' tears//
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a beautiful piece thanx for writin it
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a beautiful piece thanx for writin it
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Lol, he's in jail right now trubblecleff
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oh, well free ruggz free ruggz
still liked it
still liked it
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