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Expand your artistic ability through poetry and story telling. Poetry has been given new life ever since the inception of hip hop. Relax for a minute and explore your poetic side here.

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How i wish to be your tear... To be born into your eye at the first sight of hardships, to get lost in your ocean backdrop gaze and fall off path, olny to live a lonely life upon your wrinkled cheek, holding your sweet love close with the memories of a salty past, olny to die cuddled up upon locked lips, because of the misuse of a hearts key...
POET OF THE YEAR 2011
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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Post by 16 Micz »

eh deep shit dont really kno how to judge a poem though but i can write some deep shit..
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Haha dam... my very first post in DC. Eh... guess it shows progress?

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Heyyyyyy I remember writing something like this
it's more abstract, and prolly bout the same vibe
either way this is dope for being as short as it is
nicely written and very sick! I'm diggin' it my dude
keep writing!@
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