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Expand your artistic ability through poetry and story telling. Poetry has been given new life ever since the inception of hip hop. Relax for a minute and explore your poetic side here.

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The last time I seen you like this I made promise.
Not only to you, to myself also.
I promised to never fall apart when you need someone
Here to put you back together.

Believe me... I never meant to burn you
With the fire between us... I was only trying to keep you warm.
You walk around like the floor beneath you isn't crumbling.
Like... like the sky above you is still gonna be there in the morning.

It makes me sick... of counting sheep.
Thinkin I will see you in my sleep.
But when you appear, you dissapear, and leave me with nothing to keep.
Your gone.

And that's simply because I allowed you to slip.
I couldn't stop myself from hating myself so simply... I split.
You've always been the better half of me.
I've always been the better half of you.

Let's connect and be one again.
Name "us" me.

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You walk around like the floor beneath you isn't crumbling.
Like... like the sky above you is still gonna be there in the morning.

helluva visual there.
i only have one complaint...should have been longer lol
it dont gotta be summer for me to come up north with da birds~Murda for bricks
or Murda by numbers WHEN i Point the 1-2 gauges tre' or fo-five at ya six
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Haha word. Ran outta juice tho... I'm sure by free flow poetry 20 they will be hella long haha

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Preciate the feed man thank you

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