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Payin' Homage To Those I Influenced

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Break borders with 8 tracks and tape recorders for queer kids
Volunteer spits that take rappers down quicker than pollen smeared cliffs
All for the sake of fearlessness, Till Riggz reaches sheer abyss
It’s getting to the point now where I merely make guest appearances
It’s a heavy burden carrying on my back the raps these cats tale
Vultures that hack with brass talons will vomit up glass nails
Sad as hell when you see cats redrafting original scripts
Venomous tryst white water rafting down these digital blips
Pivot and twist and still won’t get the gist of these traveling sounds
Giving the pessimists a fit when Riggz gets to unraveling nouns
Tightening the reigns of verbs that sit atop of forgotten thrones
Raining with psalms for each drop another flock of the bottom moans
Not that I’m a condone this gross miscarriage of justice found
Pawns parry and thrust for now but get captured and busted down
With blind faith I leap recklessly over net emcees in a single bound
Steely eyes climbing over bifocals, keeps my casting a wrinkled frown
Mean muggin’, naw just examine it from my frame of perspective
I stepped away for a second, came back and saw how bad the game was molested
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this shit was def illy...

All for the sake of fearlessness, Till Riggz reaches sheer abyss
It’s getting to the point now where I merely make guest appearances

Sad as hell when you see cats redrafting original scripts
Venomous tryst white water rafting down these digital blips
Pivot and twist and still won’t get the gist of these traveling sounds
Giving the pessimists a fit when Riggz gets to unraveling nouns

With blind faith I leap recklessly over net emcees in a single bound
Steely eyes climbing over bifocals, keeps my casting a wrinkled frown

these were sick bars overall,
the rest of it was jus one liners which they were dope

id give this a 8.5/10 for this it was well written, clear content n u followed it well... flow was nice n smooth throughout the piece, nice job man

this was the first piece i read from you n u actually shocked n impressed me
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Sym, I'm glad I didn't dissappoint you. It's all in the name of elevation...
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Truly an Influential drop..always did like your style Riggz! keep it up
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Cre@T!Ve wrote:Truly an Influential drop..always did like your style Riggz! keep it up
Preciate it ThoughT, keep buildin'. I see you on your way to this type of style.
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Post by Quix »

Elevation is right family ... your story writing/scriptures are really coming together hommie!!


this one especially!!! props nigguh!
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Been gone awhile
Nice to come back and see u keep elevatin bro.
Nice work fam.
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Thanks for the props Quix/Def.. always appreciated from my fellow writers.
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Post by DaPrince »

I liked this piece. Sym quoted the notable lines but really the entire thing was dope. Stayed on topic, consistent multi's. Good work bro.
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JJunior77 wrote:I liked this piece. Sym quoted the notable lines but really the entire thing was dope. Stayed on topic, consistent multi's. Good work bro.
thanks for lookin' out JJ.
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this joint was on point, very effective flow, structure was aight, rhyme scheme was damn consistant, multis were descent, it just all came together nice. lacked similes but made up for it with some descent metaphors, wat I most liked was the overall vibe of it, just hit nice all around, stay up and keep doing you. 1
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damn. this shit make me wanna quit writing. straight fire top to bottom
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citizenslain wrote:damn. this shit make me wanna quit writing. straight fire top to bottom
..I'd rather see you elevate my man. 'Preciate the props none the less.
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