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I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

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I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

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[soundclick]8799224[/soundclick]

Hook: Kid Cudi
1st verse: Viral
2nd verse: HKX
Beat produced by Eminem.

If you're going to leave feed plz provide a link with something I could feed for you. Thank you and enjoy the track.
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Re: I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

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mayne just beat me too the beat dope lyrics from all of yah there the lyrics matched the beat well very good quality as usual dope stuff keep it comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

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Boys.. This is dope has heck ya'll... At first when i heard the hook it was just like average but then by the end of the track im singing it lol.. Viral.. Man the way you laid this verse was the best i have ever heard from you man, the twist and mulit's and all that were on lock dude.. Keep it up man.. HKX.. You did your thing man.. You gave the track that strong finish and all.. Rode the beat well.. Good stuff..
All you did it perfect for the beat.. usually you hear the beat made the song but you all made the beat make the song.. haha.. Keep it up guys

You can feed this... http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dead- ... 15922.html
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Re: I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

daammmmnnn... this is straight 100 my neww
fav track from the AME famm
guys this shit was some crack
perfect in my eyes

beat
lyrics
delivery
swagg
hook
concept

all on direct point... hot shit

btw im bumpin this again
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

Post by complexity »

Viral. The whole kiss the horizon part of the verse was tremendous, I thought the lyrics and the flow could have been slightly more sharper.

HKX. A few rhymes that seemed like they were the most common denominator, but by far my favorite verse from you, and the flow was real nice.

The production was cool, to me its kind of a bland beat. I'm not really musically inclined enough to judge the mechanics though. The hook seemed right.

The topic was pretty decent. There seemed to be a good sense of direction.
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Re: I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

Post by Flo'z »

Y'all did your thing but I ripped this track a while ago "I Hear Them"
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Re: I Hear Them Calling Me Feat. Kid Cudi, Viral & HKX

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Flo'z dope track dawg liked dat shit haha not 2 sure bout da diss tho towards Drake and Jay but dats all u overall i thought it was nicely mixed got ur message across everyone good lookin' on da feed appreciate.
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