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My Newest Track - Im preforming it for my venue at Omaha 360. Its a Hot Track

1st Verse - ME
2nd Verse - My homeboy Demo
3rd Verse - Me


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Its amazing , dude , the beat was really ill... your flow is realllllyyy good and the lyrics are fine. overall it was real good. good luck.
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Post by complexity »

Nice man my favorite verse was the first one. Ill leave more detailed feedback later but props.
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welcome to the site.

it was a good track. I like the beat, and the whole song all together. The lyrics where pretty good, above average level for sure. the recording was pretty good also. The were plenty of quotable lines. overall it was a real dope track, and i look forward to more.

stay up and keep dropin man.
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Post by RizPekT »

I"m feelin dis track mayne...one thing i noticed tho is that u ran out of breath on some of ur lines..u might wanna shorten the lines a bit or jus find maybe a better way to structure the verse so that u have more breaks to get sum oxygen..other then that it's str8...i like the beat n quality is str8... overall a nice track kid keep it up.
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I actually just smoke a lot...(Cigz, not weed) So i run outta breath quickly....but ima quit soon and get breathing lessonz anywayz so yeah

but thanx for all the feed homeboyz
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Lol. I've heard so many people say they were going to quit for that reason.
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Lolz Word...But na, Me and my girl are getting married soon and I promised her I would quit b4 we got married...Soi im just killin 2 birdz with one stone feel me ? lolz
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Yup. I personally enjoy killing birds
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LMAO
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dudee lol this wuz hot no doubt feelin it..i gotta disagree wit one of the ppl above me said they said u need ta work on breath control,well i dont think thatz the caseu juz gotta use smaller words or re word it or suttin overall hot ish dude no doubt stay droppin -1-
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

isnt that beat by Lil Zane from the song 'ways of the world'?aint tryna hate i juz noticed
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Post by Solo »

Na, Itz a Bravado beat...It waz sampled from Sting

Nas used the same sample as well

But thanx for the feed homie..appriate it
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