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Dead And Gone Remix

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Just a little project i was working on, Enjoy
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

Post by eMCee Havic »

dude this is way better than the original. lol..

but really your flow was insanE! shit was quick.. i liked how it was purposely choppy like, sounded like a verbal strobe light at times.. prob my favorite drop i've heard from you. keep um coming man

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-- Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:20 am --

dude this is way better than the original. lol..

but really your flow was insanE! shit was quick.. i liked how it was purposely choppy like, sounded like a verbal strobe light at times.. prob my favorite drop i've heard from you. keep um coming man

*props*

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/wicke ... 15889.html
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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Thanks man, Much appreciated, It took forever for some1 to drop feed on this, but thanks man and imma definitely drop on your piece...

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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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something weird sounding about the beat i think but i guess that doesnt matter all that much
anyway, ur rap was pretty dope. nice flow and lyrics real nice. sometn im feelin. i think it woulda been even better if u jus made this into ur own track completely. without this nigga on the hook and on an original beat. but its tite tho. quality/mix could b a bit better, but u came nice enough that its definitely worth the lisen regardless
once agin tho. nice lyrics. respect
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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Yeah i would have loved to dont this to an original beat and i actually had a friend lined up to sin the hook and the 3rd verse but he kinda dropped out.. but thanks for the feed...

Keep em commin
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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Thanks for the feed man, much appreciated..

keep feeding illest

-- Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:37 pm --

Thanks for the feed man, much appreciated..

keep feeding illest
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

Post by complexity »

Wow...

The pace was incredible, the enunciation was great too. A few call back rhymes that really brought home the rapid rate that you were spitting. I don't think that you're a great rhymer yet, but you're a pretty great writer, and you can tell a story well. Even at this really fast pace, I can still take away a clear message, that shows a lot of talent.

I think that everyone should check this out. Stop sleeping.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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nice song man, like the hook, club banger, and you can spit fast, i have a few really ill fast spitin shit, when i put it out i'll have to have your opp, hey man do you have a soundclick, could i see if you do?
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

Post by HKX »

This track was good imo liked how u switched up the message on the beat ur gettin' better everytime u keep droppin' a track. Fast type flow was ill 2 not sure how long u been flowin' but ur gettin' there wit it keep droppin'.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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thanks guys for the feed.. much appreciated.. i am just involving more and more and your feed and all really helps me do that.. thanks a lot.. keep feeding if you can.. ill drop another here in a day or so
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Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

Post by IntrinsicCadence »

Nice man, appreciate the elevated themes you spittin here. Your fast style matches this beat well, and is actually pretty easy to understand all your words which is nice in a fast flow like this. The 'hook' recording thing sounds like a radio clip that needs better quality though. Keep droppin creations...
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

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This was just a remix from T.I. and JT's track Dead and Gone.. I just left the hook sung by JT on there and desided to add my own flavor of verse... I am gonna take my verses and add it to an original beat just gotta find the right one.. thanks for the love.. keep showing it
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I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

definitely the best i've heard from you, i never felt a lot of your shit but this has some replay value, flow was nice, message was nice, not the most impressive rhymer, if you worked on that it would definitely be close to perfect, tempo was nice, with this single track i can easily say your in in that top ten audio list, good job deciple
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much appreciated... My 2nd album im working on is gonna blow these tracks outta the water... And i definitely wanna make a few tracks with some of you talented rappers on here... Thanks for the feed..
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i'll be lookin forward to hearin it man, if ever whenever i'm always down for a collab, i lack the equipment but i can definitely find my way to one, i got a dude that's a master at mixing as well, no one from the site, someone i know outside this board that does it professionally for a living, so hit me up, i got a few ideas seeing u as a christian rapper
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