Talking in Code

Mr.Yoyo · Post by **Mr.Yoyo** » Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:28 pm

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lyric ... ml#p134063

To the trends the strong become the weakest servants
Politicians creep their words in like sneaky serpents
Making us believe we’re the beneath the earth if
The persons that we really wanna be should surface

We blow roofs off of battle domes
What lies beneath brings pressure like magma flow
In denial attackers go to laugh at those
Who chose to seek completion when they got half a soul

But their hearts still speak when their spirits sway
On bitter days they hear what conscious lyrics say
And for a minute a social politician is replaced
With a mirror placed within that shows the inner face

They grimace, pain comes with every straw of the load
Unnecessary burdens that I’m not gonna hold
They lost themselves, find you, be you, if u wanna be whole
Sorrow grows as their hollowness groans

Talking in code we sweat when we mean tears
Our recklessness breeds fear. We’re desperate to see clear
Forced to suffocate and wait til heaven to breathe air
The masks that we carry are the heaviness we bare

Mr.Yoyo · Post by **Mr.Yoyo** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:57 am

thnx uppin this:D

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:58 am

To the trends the strong become the weakest servants
Politicians creep their words in like sneaky serpents
Making us believe we’re the beneath the earth if
The persons that we really wanna be should surface

yup i think this was yah best part ^^

Rel nice Piece family!

Tipsy/ Tips · Post by **Tipsy/ Tips** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:18 am

i like it.. deep..

But their hearts still speak when their spirits sway
On bitter days they hear what conscious lyrics say

very nice..

Mr.Yoyo · Post by **Mr.Yoyo** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:22 am

lol...cool how each person likes a different part....if yall leave links i'll rtf

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:59 am

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/horoc ... 15871.html

YEAH MAN ^^ THANKS ^ peep that drop!

QwarterZ · Post by **QwarterZ** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:10 am

This was purdy dope....appreciate the read
got that raw ILLNESS to it...very well written
coulda been longer...then again you mighta lost my attention....lol just playin'

Talking in code we sweat when we mean tears
Our recklessness breeds fear. We’re desperate to see clear
Forced to suffocate and wait til heaven to breathe air
The masks that we carry are the heaviness we bare

I like how you ended it very dope my friend
keep writing!

Mr.Yoyo · Post by **Mr.Yoyo** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:16 am

lol thnx for the feed yall

DaPrince · Post by **DaPrince** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:56 am

I agree with the above, man this whole piece was dope. The flow was consistent, the multi's and inners were definitely there. I'm interested to see what other pieces you drop so keep writin bro.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/thesis-vt15874.html

Mr.Yoyo · Post by **Mr.Yoyo** » Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:27 pm

still uppin this...

LogiK · Post by **LogiK** » Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:13 am

Damn, Looks Like We Got Another Dude Bringing Heat! Lol This Was Pretty Dope Though, To Many Spots To Quote. But Looking Foward To Seeing More, You're Defiantly Talented.

Mr.Yoyo · Post by **Mr.Yoyo** » Sat Mar 06, 2010 12:57 pm

thnx man....

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:40 am

I actually like this piece more than, probably because its longer.

The lines that Quix pointed out were my favorite too. Just solid writing, that brings home a point.

Can't complain. Far from a masterpiece, but worth the praise that it has received.

Welcome to Illest, stay around man. We have a lot of writers that I think you will learn to appreciate, and you can really help us get this scripture section going again.

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