Dominyen - Slippin(Freestyle)

[C.E.O.]

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_2938203

[YungDosia]

wow.....whack as fuck homey u need to practice more, honestly.

[C.E.O.]

thanks ThaOneYouHate YungDosia eat a dick fag

[Loon E Lou]

aight homie, fuck what these otha cats said. ur shit is dope. only thing in my opinion, is the emotion. this supposed to be a real talk kinda shit. from wat it sound like. so wheres the emotion?? trust me homie, you thro a lil grrrrr or uhhhhhh on ur words, the shit would be straight. i aint hatin at all tho. the project is dope overall. it jus makes it harder for the listener to understand what u feel if you aint throwin no feelin. feel me?? haha. n e way, dont stop droppin. ur whole album/mixtape is dope. i heard most of em. and the only only only thing u missin........is emotion. so hopefully u take this into consideration. cus im an audio head, so keep droppin, and ill keep listenin. keep doin u dawg. little by little. u almost there.


loon e out.......

[C.E.O.]

go lookin my nigga im listen 2 everything u say homey i fucks wit u Loon E Lou

[Kurse]

My opinion...all you need in your tracks is a lil more "MMPHHHH!" behind 'em...you feel me!? More emotion. You need to sound like you actually feel, and care about what your rappin about. If you don't sound like you care about what you're sayin...then how are you gonna make the listener care!? Put some enthusiasm into it...sell the story. If you can do that...then you'll definitely have a more marketable product. Lyrically..you sound very poetic. Just work on that presentation and you'll come together nicely after that.

[C.E.O.]

i get what u sayin homey i respect dat we woking on sum mo shit dats ready to drop