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Education ft Jjunior & Qwarterzone

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I'll unveil verbs geared to tower joint compilations
I Excel with Words so here's a Power Point presentation.
In the act of performing, my tracks are a fore warning
to the wack and conforming rappers lacking facts in their stories.
All black, I'm in mourning cuz they detract from reforming,
their practice is abhorring so these cats I'm ignoring.
The tactics I'm imploring give an incentive to listen
complex sentence transmissions like an egyptian encryptian.
A rift or division, my scripts different by description
Made an executive decision to correct my sick competition
Infected with repetition. While I individually mature,
a miracle? sure more like a lyrical entrepreneur
Giving visual tours with picture-perfect diction,
observing worthless submissions that serve surface cognition.
My purpose and mission is to enlighten the masses
but like lightning forecasted my lines frighten combatants.
My divine rhyming tactics issue fatalities, I finish them.
No hospitality cuz they lack originality they synonyms.
They just mimicin', so i commandeered the stage
volunteered to trail blaze and engineered a new age.


I don't care if you ain't gettin' me
subsequently I'm workin' so differently
rock star motive within transitioning schemes
I could show you the stars with my imagery
hopin' you sick of me and my mars calligraphy
the epitome of lame, our symmetry substained
milky ways, divinity astranged, finicky with pain
Sistine's enraged, if you can't picture me in frames
u need to pop out the spectacle, n limit ur gaze
from these tidbits of grain, that was lifted from rain
and shown the path to apocalypse unscripted in flame
as I was grippin' insanity that's dephicted in change
the risk is debate while y'all dream of figments of gain
e-thor I'm distant from lames or just lost in this safe
this safe beneath the casket where bastards recite wack shit
n I just became passive cuz they discuss rap pamphlets
with backwards actions upon the skylines upside down mattress
restin' above errythin' they think is described in scribes
life as lice, scratchin' at the top while fallin' like of Christ
nail bitten, failed livin', while tryna detail ignorance
with tall tale's, Paul Bunyans that no longer scale infinite....
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Last edited by DaPrince on Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:15 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Educatation ft Jjunior & Qwarterzone

Post by MesaR »

This was some dope shit, the flow was crazy..inner's helped out heaps aswell, nothing was streched or really forced, the vocabulary was dope as hell, not much i can really point out that was bad , besides the yellow text haha.. keep dropping both of you.
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haha i switched it to red. Preciate it though. Anyone else?
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Post by Riggz »

Hot collab fellas, jelled well.

"I'll unveil verbs geared to tower joint compilations
I Excel with Words so here's a Power Point presentation.
In the act of performing, my tracks are a fore warning
to the wack and conforming rappers lacking facts in their stories." - intro blazed it

"from these tidbits of grain, that was lifted from rain
and shown the path to apocalypse unscripted in flame
as I was grippin' insanity that's dephicted in change
the risk is debate while y'all dream of figments of gain" - nice wit the metaphores there...
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Post by ThatSexyDude »

yeah this was dope specially on the metaphors, both verses were on point about the subject =). i like that last line on the first verse (blue text) keep it up =)
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Re: Educatation ft Jjunior & Qwarterzone

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I'll Leave proper Feed Later But I Find It Ironic That You Spelt Education Wrong
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Can't front, it was hot...
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Preciate the feed. I was in a hurry when I wrote the title but I fixed it.
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Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah i liked it.. kind of a "space the final fronteir" feel i wouldnt mind seeing some more collabs with you two. both got simular style and imagr.

good drop
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Preciate the feed bro.
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Re: Educatation ft Jjunior & Qwarterzone

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- Mutual - wrote:I'll Leave proper Feed Later But I Find It Ironic That You Spelt Education Wrong
I lol'd!

uppin' for those that might've missed it
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Re: Education ft Jjunior & Qwarterzone

Post by complexity »

Oh shit. Junior murdered this collab.

Quarterzone came nice as hell. But Junior just kept coming with dope line after dope line.

"My purpose and mission is to enlighten the masses
but like lightning forecasted my lines frighten combatants. "

The whole first half of that drop was incredible. Actually this collab made me hype about what you can do with a collab again. Seeing that I've personally ruined so many lately.

Pretty much what you'd expect from Quarterzone, no lines really stuck out more than the others.
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