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Humanity

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Humanity

Goes to the beat of: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qC9qmimDoM

I've learned to realize that, everything is the same
Repeated history through actions we can never maintain
The kind balance which was given to us, grace of God
Declare war on a country and we begin to applaud
This type of world we livin in is a test of mind
Placed on a single land mass, to kill off our own kind
This kind of shit happens in cycles, its been to long
Began with genesis, and from there it just prolonged
I see a vision of prosperity, can you see it too?
Peace is the kind of rhythm we should all listen to

I've been up on the blocks, in Peru dealin spots
The type of crowd who only changes when someone gets shot
Maybe it's everybody though , we in this thing together
Like Nas said this type of shit can last forever
So I be waving my banner in all my city streets
Before we all wet the bed and make God change the sheets
I'm jammin up the system so this thing don't repeat
I'm needin all humanity to represent peace...

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Nice and gentle flow. Nothing outstanding, just kind of fluid you know what I mean. content would appeal to a sultry type group.

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This was cool
I'm diggin' how you went with the beat
it doesn't stand out but it does in a way
well till the 2nd verse starts
then I was like.....ok?
but you picked it up


The kind balance which was given to us, grace of God
Declare war on a country and we begin to applaud
This type of world we livin in is a test of mind
Placed on a single land mass, to kill off our own kind
^^^^^^^purdy dope ish right there

keep writing my dude
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