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Deciple
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Long Good Bye

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This song i wrote for my brother, it has a little long intro and the hook is crazy but it reached to my brother so i just wanted to share with you all... Enjoy
Last edited by Deciple on Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by Young K »

This was kool man, I liked the hook and the flow was on point.
Lyrics were real dope, and the concept was great.

I like your shit man, keep dropping.
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Re: Long Good Bye

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Thanks Man, I will be sure to keep dropping as they come.
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by -TraMaTiK- »

alot better then what i hurd from u before,definetly a step u. i wasnt feelin the hook as much as the verses but i still liked the whole thing overall. keep at it i wanna hear more
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this shit is chill, i liked the flow and feel of it man.. each song i hear from u ur changin my mind about christian rap... homie ur straight illy on a beat man. we should collab sometime
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: Long Good Bye

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There aint alot of Christian rap out there that catches people eyes.. Im glad mine catches some1's..
~~Deciple~~

-- Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:57 pm --

Uppin for more feed, once i get 10 people to drop feed ill lay another track...
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by FlipSide »

the intro was tight...and the song has meaning to it as well...I like the slow feel u got going on with the spitting..shows versatility..and u missing a hook or is this the end? no its not.. but i have a brother as well and i feel responsible for some of his actions tho he is older... but this is a heartfelt track for real... people can learn from the impact a lil meaning could give a track ...UUUUPPPP
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by HKX »

Emotion on dis was def ill man u stepped up a lot on dis track don't blame u it's ur brother. Beat is mad ill man I really hope ur brother really sits down and thinks bout his future. Being a father is 1 of da most important things he will have 2 do in life. Def da strongest track u have dropped on here and by far my fav 1 keep droppin' homie.
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Thanks man, much appreciated, i hope that he gets it straight and all that, thats for the feed
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by Loon E Lou »

this is reaaaaaaal dawg. i felt all the emotion buildin up as u went along. hook is dope an fresh but most of all, real. ur flow was on point. ya really bounced wit the beat. and talkin bout the beat, nice choice dawg. i dunno if u made it or not but it goes real well with what u were talkin bout. keep reppin for your peeps dawg. thas one thing alotta people dont do anymore. but real fresh drop man. i dunno how long its been around, but i jus got a hold of it. i like it alot dawg. mixin and editing were on point also. dope dope
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Thanks Loon E Lou, Yeah i got this beat and it just came you know, those types of songs that as soon as you grab hear of a beat you just cant be stopped... Thanks for the feed homie
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by K KiLLaH »

This is dope i like tracks like these with deep meanings im still tryna write one not pertaining to girls lol but on sum real shit u really put ya foot in this i liked dis joint
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Re: Long Good Bye

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You all should rate this track... let me know what you all think.. thanks illest.. if you havent feed on it.. feed on it and leave a link and ill feed back
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Long Good Bye

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This song was great man. Very inspiring. I loved all of it.
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Re: Long Good Bye

Post by IntrinsicCadence »

This is a real nice track man. The emotion is palpable, thick enough to cut with a knife. I actually like your flow style when it's in this slower more smooth style than your faster style. This is probably the best of the tracks I've heard from you.
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