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Slick T. Beast
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mind elevation.

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hey folks lend me your ear.
im sick like an infected ear.

haha im messin, here we go...

from the top lyricists, nobody want it with slick/
cant hurt me, life birthed me, ima son of a bitch/
i get high off my tracks like im jumpin a fence/
...we rock reeboks, and i'm runnin this shit/

tired yet? i kill vets like a government pig/
i'm not only touchin you, but im touchin ya kids/
i need... no big words to surpass your skill/
i keep... a big hearse to relax my kill/

16 bars a misdemeanor for slick and o.n.e./ (my krew)
yo i got this joint poppin like a broken knee/
but im sick of this club, same fade, same sofa/
i play hova...it's bumpin out my range rova/

now i got two bitches and i just wanna stab em/
i toss em in the back of the trunk and start laughin/
...now they wont fit so i cut off the baby fat/
used to call me slick, but now im slick the maniac/


this is my first 16 on this site. i think i been rappin for a year now...feedback?

and when i do "..."; thats a pause.
player haters play this in cell blocks and rock stages.
winkin' at some, female cops with cocked gauges.
really it's papers im addicted to.
wasn't for rap, then i'd be stickin you,
the mac inside the triple goose.
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Re: mind elevation.

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not bad not bad at all, but honestly you coulda came harder! keep at it n you'll see what I mean. try to stay away from topics that are played
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Re: mind elevation.

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ay thanks for peepin it, but nah i know what you mean, id rather rap about one subject but this is just for people to get used to me here, feel me?
player haters play this in cell blocks and rock stages.
winkin' at some, female cops with cocked gauges.
really it's papers im addicted to.
wasn't for rap, then i'd be stickin you,
the mac inside the triple goose.
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Re: mind elevation.

Post by Loon E Lou »

haha. shits dope dawg. i liked the way errything flowed. i could def hear that on the mic. ku shit for a lil breakout session. keep em comin dawg. good read homie
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Re: mind elevation.

Post by Slick T. Beast »

iight thanks, it was just a lil somethin i came up with. good lookin tho.
player haters play this in cell blocks and rock stages.
winkin' at some, female cops with cocked gauges.
really it's papers im addicted to.
wasn't for rap, then i'd be stickin you,
the mac inside the triple goose.
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