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Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****
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Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****
but da track is hott
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Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****
ok ok. imma b straight up and down. shit was ill. i liked the picture u painted. real clear. vocal quality wasnt sensational but u still got the point across real well. i concur wit toyh, i wasnt too big on the punch ins. i think maybe if you threw a lil bit more emotion, the shit would be straight as fuck. overall though, ku joint. at times u fell off i think, but rebounded ku. like i said, i think this track is hot. better than the other shit ive heard from yall. 8/10 jus cus i think u could of came a lil tougher. dope dope tho
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Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****
thanks u i respect dat
Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****
Great story, beat is ight, Like Loon E Lou said, Need more emotion, but for the way you delivered it the ad-lips and all needed to be there.. Now if you sung it with emotion you would want to let some of the ad-lips go.. You got strong lyrics man.. You can tell a story real well.. Overall Not Bad..
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I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****
thanks my nigga
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