My first

[Wrez]

Just downloaded FL studio yesterday, only been using it about eight hours but decided to throw something up, chopped + arranged the sample in Audacity because I CBA to use the Slicer or playlist.

http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 4630210bb/

Extremely lazy with the chopping, plus I need to put real drums on it and I need to fix the bassline but it's a first effort so why not post it.

[Riggz]

Alright, Alright... slow down the tempo.. smooth out your sample.. (bring it down a tad over the beat), get rid of the clicks and what not... then let's go for it. I want to rhyme over this sample... nice shit for just starting out Wrez...
Get with a couple of producer heads up here.. these guys got a ton of knowledge.

I'm looking forward to hearing this when you're done.. i'm already thinking of verse for this!

[Mass Effex]

That was way too choppy, didn't sound like you added any drums of your own. Didn't flow well, the sample was nice, and I like the direction you went, but you just gotta practice more, and look up tutorials and shit. I'll help if you need help with anything small.

[Lawgix]

i agree with alot of whats been said here... the sample was cool a bit loud but it was cool... really no drum pattern to follow along... also didn't hear any snare really... may just be me... wwwwaaaayyyyy too choppy the loop was horrible... i can't make beats but i think this has potential to be somethin dope... so more drums a snare kick... work on that loop too... and get a sound click man... zshare or whatever sucks horribly... i hate it...