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Tha TitantroN

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Just a lil quickie! feed will be returned


Itz like i gotta "get outta jail" card, my immunityz set /
Aint takin "CHANCES" when i blast tha whole "community's chestz!" /
I aint lookin in tha toilet but im judgin ur shit /
U could only "pull a fast one" when ur tuggin ur dick! /
Titan rough rugged n shit, prolly fuckin yo bitch /
Alwayz knockin my door when shez had enough of yo shit /
I KNOW IM AMAZIN, and i love tha perception /
Donate my body to science so they can study perfection /
My flow'z sick i expose u bitchez with explosive writtenz /
U only gonna get "near a hit" in close collisionz! /
Better start holdin ya mouth, or my crew will roll in ya house /
I'll shine a "laser on yo pad" like it was holdin a MOUSE! /
Exposin ya doubtz, breakin through doors like they babys gumz /
In my neighbourhood the gunz clap louder than stadiumz! /
Piss on ya ROOTS like a dog, ya rhymez is pathetic /
Titan gonna "fill-a-buster" like them fuckz in the senate! /
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dope dope dope. good shit dawg
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Post by Gizmo Duck »

lol, loved those first 2 lines, great drop.
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Post by Glamtrash »

So, I don't know how long you've been around since I just recently came back. But welcome anyway haha.

I must say, this was pretty fucking decent, dude. You show some definite potential. Keep droppin', I'd definitely like to see more from you.

(As for returning the feed, you can find my shit in the Distilled Concepts section)

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Post by DaPrince »

Opening two lines and the last line were the dopest parts of this, and then the line about donate my body so they can study perfection was dope too. Overall, it was good though, flow was pretty consistent and multies were there. Good shit.
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Post by Riggz »

I'm ridin' the bandwagon.. 1st bar and last bar did the song justice, within the midst were some played lines like the "pull a fast one" and "close collisionz" but other than that... i see the skillz.
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Post by QwarterZ »

I'ma have to say I agree with erryone else....

which sucks from my perspec....

either way I was diggin' the study perfection line
alot of this was dope....keep writing!
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Post by JHaze »

agree with the feed above bro this pretty tight nice way to show people you got some skills with punches n multies ill be lookin for more from you
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Post by ~TITAN SPITEFUL~ »

thankz for tha feed an uppin this shit
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