Thought vs Quix

[Quix]

5 bars, house rules!


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Due by tomorrow!


G'uck

[NoVeL]

check!!

Quix I've been rappin as captain since I was an embryo, Can't you see that?.. while sippin on decaf I'll decapp.. sever ya head, leave ya body detached n life line critical,

This a damn shame pitful, when good friends come 2 get at you, knife poke 2 the side of ya sliced throat, you might choke or give a slight croak.. keepin ya time line at its minimal,

No biggie laugh now cry later, The slogan of maino is hi hater.. you bout 2 get ass fucked in this battle.. Like strap-ons wid cockring vibrators!!

I came equipped 2 quickly n quietly kill Quix, Considerin the situation I'm in I know I can feel his.. pulse through the coffin I threw em in.. I'll bury em alive n fortify his casket wit drill bits,

I pop toasters that rock shoulders, leave ya top slouched over.. life line flat.. lookin like sum hot cola, I got bitches that r bi polar, who'll drive aside ya driver's side, riding wit you side by side, n by the time you realize the ply.. dey will pop 3 shots inside ya ride.. n make ya whole drop blow up!!

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[Quix]

aight fam, G'Luck


Quix a Menace wid descriptive sentences that'll have yah teeth rott like yah missed the Dentist
I'm Split yah Tendents, cuz dah only ones saying 'Thoughts is Crazy' are Skitsophrenics

Give this Bitch no mention, Quix can bench him plus i can Detect you'll loose Bruh!
cuz i'm about to put high 'voltage tah your mouth' like Tim allens electric toothbrush lol

I can afford tah go half ass cuz i Got me Thugz tah Shoot shotty Slugs at che'you
tell this Kocky Thug dah truth, I can kill em, and have 'T Baged' like Coffee substitutes

Tired of those prehistoric rhymes you spit, that only Old Timers would Read
so when i Drop this Migit we'll see 'Thoughts go Missing' like Althimers disease

[Riggz]

Thought -
Quix I've been rappin as captain since I was an embryo, Can't you see that?.. while sippin on decaf I'll decapp.. sever ya head, leave ya body detached n life line critical,
(2/5 played with the words but stretched the bars so it seemed like fillers)

This a damn shame pitful, when good friends come 2 get at you, knife poke 2 the side of ya sliced throat, you might choke or give a slight croak.. keepin ya time line at its minimal,
(2/5 more word play but mostly simple fillers, nothing hard hitting)

No biggie laugh now cry later, The slogan of maino is hi hater.. you bout 2 get ass fucked in this battle.. Like strap-ons wid cockring vibrators!!
(3/5 fucked like vibrators played to the fullest, scored the word play, hi hater line was goofy but made me chuckle)

I came equipped 2 quickly n quietly kill Quix, Considerin the situation I'm in I know I can feel his.. pulse through the coffin I threw em in.. I'll bury em alive n fortify his casket wit drill bits,
(2/5, Ok honestly Thought, that “I can feel his” part sounded Gay.. really man, what was that? But again, kill Quix/drill bits.. I did like that part, just had to sort through the fillers to go to it.)

I pop toasters that rock shoulders, leave ya top slouched over.. life line flat.. lookin like sum hot cola, I got bitches that r bi polar, who'll drive aside ya driver's side, riding wit you side by side, n by the time you realize the ply.. dey will pop 3 shots inside ya ride.. n make ya whole drop blow up!!
(2/5 “I.. pop.. toasters.. that… rock.. shoulders”? – really, you previewed that and thought that was a good line? Well afterwards, you came nice with life line/ hot cola.. and then you just kept going with this bar like it was never going to end. Points off for fillers)
(11/25 Average punches and rhyme flow, fillers killed you) Maybe you got a “Twista” type flow, I don’t know, just can’t see you spittin that many words in a bar. Not sayin’ it can’t be done, I just ain’t feelin it.

Quix – 1st off you missin a bar according to the rules.
Quix a Menace wid descriptive sentences that'll have yah teeth rott like yah missed the Dentist
I'm Split yah Tendents, cuz dah only ones saying 'Thoughts is Crazy' are Skitsophrenics
(3.5 oh the Skitsoprenics line was nice)

Give this Bitch no mention, Quix can bench him plus i can Detect you'll Bruh!
cuz i'm about to put high 'voltage tah your mouth' like Tim allens electric toothbrush lol
(2.5/5 tried too hard on that one Quix “you’ll Bruh/Tooth brush”.. watch your typo’s cause that hardly fit at all)

I can afford tah go half ass cuz i Got me Thugz tah Shoot shotty Slugs at che'you
tell this Kocky Thug dah truth, I can kill em, and have 'T Baged' like Coffee substitutes
(3/5 Coffee Substitutes.. could’ve been a killer bar had you actually tried on the first half of the bar )

Tired of those prehistoric rhymes you spit, that only Old Timers would Read
so when i Drop this Migit we'll see 'Thoughts go Missing' like Althimers disease
(3.5 Great punch for your closer, flow was off… and unfortunately, IT IS your closer at the 4th bar.. let’s see what it calculates to…)
12/20 Wow, by a nose…

Quix still outscored Thought by my calculation… So Vote = Quix… (sad because he half assed it and still pulled off a vote)

[Quix]

miscalculated 12.5 ^^^ not 12

1-0 Quix Bump

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Flow: Quix- Think u were more on point then Thought was

Punches: Quix- Gotta agree wit TOYH Q's punchline's were way harder then Thoughts I didn't really read n e thing dat stood out on thoughts besides dis line right here (No biggie laugh now cry later, The slogan of maino is hi hater.. you bout 2 get ass fucked in this battle.. Like strap-ons wid cockring vibrators!!)

Personals: Quix- Tie (Q's last bar and Thoughts 1st bar only personals I saw imo)

Complexity: Quix- even wit out have a 5th bar u did damage on Thought wordplay was def dope, u went hard on punches (Tim Allen line was funny had me rollin'), creativity was a more unique's then thoughts

Name/Wordplay: Quix- like TOYH said didn't see n e 4rm Thought

Enjoyment: Quix- like I said even wit out a 5th bar u still did mad justice 2 em


Vote-Quix

[Quix]

3-0 Quix


good battle dog, update n close