ThoUghT vs. JayGunna

[NoVeL]

House Rules
8 bars
Multi:
Wordplay:
Punches:
Creativity:

No recycled shit please!! n Good luck you have 48 hrs 2 post this!!

[NoVeL]

Knowin Jay 8 bars shouldnt be alot 4 em' he'll prolly accept though..I dont care really I just would like to battle em'.

[JayGunna]

I'll Drop Tomorrow before work..not a promise but it will be done asap...


and TOYH Thanks for the concern homie...

-- 12 Jan 2010 15:20 --

Ready When You Are...Will Edit This...With Drop Once I See Your Ready...

-- 12 Jan 2010 23:09 --

.::Dont HoShow::.

Jay Is Evil TIl Death..Murdered So Many Victims Like You...My Punishment Should Be Lethal Inject!/
No one Believes Your Beating The Best...Cause We All Know Your Ass A Joke Similar To The Sequels Of Shrek!!//lol
The Flows Impeccable...Thought Is Similar To Average College Athletes...He Wont Go Professional!/
So If He Brag That He Bad As Satin...Ill Torture Till This Faggot Shakin...Similar To Cold Homosexuals!!//lmao
Im Gettin Too Aggravated...He'll Have No Time For Thoughts...After I Leave Him Decapitated!/
And Ya Record Shows Your Skill...After This Battle...It'll Be Changed To The Year I Graduated!!//damn
Hes Getting Hammered With Losses...While Jay Is Steady Gettin Attacked With Wins/
So Its Best You Retire From Battle Grounds And Go Back To The Forum Your Most Active In!!/
He Hate That Im Hot..I'll Rob Him...Straight Take What He Bought/
Tie His Hands Up...And Like Execution Style Shootings..I'll Aim At His Thoughts!!//Bang
After That I'll Laugh At You Pussy...And Straight Spit In Ya Face/
Fuck Hiding Evidence...Take Ya Blood And Put My Name All Over The Place//
Fuck It Im Done Wit This Lame So..
Thought Better Start To Defend...Or Jay'll Be Forced To Target Him In/
In Callouts He Asked Was There Food For Thought?...Ha Guess He'll Be Starvin Again!!//
Lyrically Inclined?..Pls Change Ya Title Fag...This Aint Bible Class...But I'll Get You Schooled Wit Scripts!/
Leave This Fool Dismissed...Im Cruel And Sick...While Your Similar To Scatologist With Interest In Work...
Cause...THOUGHT FULL (Thoughtful) OF SHIT!!!//LMAO

[NoVeL]

Yo...

Imma CATASTROPHE smokin hash n MAD BAGS OF WEED, YOU AFTER ME?.. Please what's JAYGUNNA do?.. I equipped silenced pistols n 4 S.A.W him becomin a WAR CASUALTY,

Nigga Imma WAR VET, drivin YELLOW PORSCHES n RED CORVETTES, through ya next door neighbor's front DOORSTEPS..

Jay a bitch 2 metal THOUGH, Cuz when the tech is SHOWN.. He'll sing jordin sparks No Air.. B 4 his chest is BLOWN,

My punchlines is BEAST, that'll FEAST on ya DESEASED, carcass n crunch on ya COLLAR BONE.. I'll murder dis cat.. n Me? I never heard of Jay so nobody will prolly KNOW,

Piece of CAKE, my kids this WEEK they PLAYED.. Operation after I killed you.. They had fun countin ya HEARTBEATS n rotting teeth DECAY,

I let off the 380 chrome n MAG n stay in da store 2 keep poppin TAGS, you never popped not even a pill you FAG.. Only thing Jayson ever sprayed on was COLOGNE.. B 4 he'd leave the store with his SHOPPING BAG,

I wear skii MASKS n carry massive WEAPONS, breakin noses n using bats 2 smash in heads WITH.. Jay only time you'd get ya "HARD ON".. is with a mass ERECTION followin' faggots 2 get ya ass INJECTED,

JayGunna LOSE cuz he a DUDE that's FEATHERWEIGHT, My guns mind read n use TELEPATHY, n my bullets carry WEIGHT cuz.. when they PENETRATE.. Straight shots will lift yo ass up off the ground n make ya spirit LEVITATE!!

Chalk em up n add 1

[JayGunna]

Vote Up...

[Momeijah]

Jay Is Evil TIl Death..Murdered So Many Victims Like You...My Punishment Should Be Lethal Inject!/
No one Believes Your Beating The Best...Cause We All Know Your Ass A Joke Similar To The Sequels Of Shrek!!//lol

i Liked The Opener But The Punch On The 2nd Line Was Anticlimatic.

The Flows Impeccable...Thought Is Similar To Average College Athletes...He Wont Go Professional!/
So If He Brag That He Bad As Satin...Ill Torture Till This Faggot Shakin...Similar To Cold Homosexuals!!//lmao

Nah, 1st Line Was More Of a Statement Than a Punchline, And The Second Had Weak Wordplay And No Personal Elements. More Of a Threat.

Im Gettin Too Aggravated...He'll Have No Time For Thoughts...After I Leave Him Decapitated!/
And Ya Record Shows Your Skill...After This Battle...It'll Be Changed To The Year I Graduated!!//damn

i Liked This Bar, Good Nameplay in The 1st Line And a Decent Personal in The 2nd.

Hes Getting Hammered With Losses...While Jay Is Steady Gettin Attacked With Wins/
So Its Best You Retire From Battle Grounds And Go Back To The Forum Your Most Active In!!/

Lol, Looked Like Filler.

He Hate That Im Hot..I'll Rob Him...Straight Take What He Bought/
Tie His Hands Up...And Like Execution Style Shootings..I'll Aim At His Thoughts!!//Bang

Man, it Was a Decent Nameplay But it Had So Much Potential To Be Better.

After That I'll Laugh At You Pussy...And Straight Spit In Ya Face/
Fuck Hiding Evidence...Take Ya Blood And Put My Name All Over The Place//

Lol.

Fuck It Im Done Wit This Lame So..
Thought Better Start To Defend...Or Jay'll Be Forced To Target Him In/
In Callouts He Asked Was There Food For Thought?...Ha Guess He'll Be Starvin Again!!//

Cool.

Lyrically Inclined?..Pls Change Ya Title Fag...This Aint Bible Class...But I'll Get You Schooled Wit Scripts!/
Leave This Fool Dismissed...Im Cruel And Sick...While Your Similar To Scatologist With Interest In Work...
Cause...THOUGHT FULL (Thoughtful) OF SHIT!!!//LMAO

Best Bar u Could've Chosen For The Finisher id Say.

Yo...

Imma CATASTROPHE smokin hash n MAD BAGS OF WEED, YOU AFTER ME?.. Please what's JAYGUNNA do?.. I equipped silenced pistols n 4 S.A.W him becomin a WAR CASUALTY,

Punch Setup Was Blah, if ur Trying To Diss Someone Who Cares if u Smoke Hash And Weed ? if u Meant To Make a Connection Between 'S.A.W' And 'War' in The 2nd Line Then That's Good (it Stands For 'Soldiers at War' @ Anyone Who Donno).

Nigga Imma WAR VET, drivin YELLOW PORSCHES n RED CORVETTES, through ya next door neighbor's front DOORSTEPS..

Wtf ? 1. Why is a Bar Like This in a Battle ? And 2. Lying isn't Cool.

Jay a bitch 2 metal THOUGH, Cuz when the tech is SHOWN.. He'll sing jordin sparks No Air.. B 4 his chest is BLOWN,

Eh, Nice idea Lol.

My punchlines is BEAST, that'll FEAST on ya DESEASED, carcass n crunch on ya COLLAR BONE.. I'll murder dis cat.. n Me? I never heard of Jay so nobody will prolly KNOW,

Lol Simple And Effective Punch, i Liked it.

Piece of CAKE, my kids this WEEK they PLAYED.. Operation after I killed you.. They had fun countin ya HEARTBEATS n rotting teeth DECAY,

u Killed Him Yet His Heart Was Still Beating ? ur Not Very Good at Murdering Then Are u. And Where's The Proof Of His Tooth Decay ? Fake Personals Only Work Against u.

I let off the 380 chrome n MAG n stay in da store 2 keep poppin TAGS, you never popped not even a pill you FAG.. Only thing Jayson ever sprayed on was COLOGNE.. B 4 he'd leave the store with his SHOPPING BAG,

Lol Funny idea With The Cologne But i Don't See How a Person Shopping is Offensive, it Only Means They Have Money And Spend it Lmao.

I wear skii MASKS n carry massive WEAPONS, breakin noses n using bats 2 smash in heads WITH.. Jay only time you'd get ya "HARD ON".. is with a mass ERECTION followin' faggots 2 get ya ass INJECTED,

Yeah This Line's Awesome, u Spoke About How ur Gangsta And How He's Gay. Shit u Even Made a Sick Ass Wordplay From 'Hard On' Comparing it To an Erection............. Are u Going For Unintentional Comedy Here Or Are u Just Delusional ?

JayGunna LOSE cuz he a DUDE that's FEATHERWEIGHT, My guns mind read n use TELEPATHY, n my bullets carry WEIGHT cuz.. when they PENETRATE.. Straight shots will lift yo ass up off the ground n make ya spirit LEVITATE!!

Yeah ur a Featherweight.


Ok Now For Scotch Hall's Final Thought (No Pun intended). JayGunna i Think u Took Thought Likely But Meh i Can't Blame u. ur Punches Are On/Off With Me, But Some Are Just Plain Bad. Especially The College, Shrek, And Faggot Lines. The Wordplays in The Last 2 Were Weak, Cause u Didn't Make Any Clever Comparisons, u Just Related Words, Not Every Double Entendre is a Punch Or Metaphor. it's Like Me Saying 'ill Leave This Asshole Scared.... Like an Anus that Just Watched Paranormal Activity', Shit's Just Forced.
Thought, u Had a Couple Of Half Decent Punches, And Some Ok (But Mostly irrelevant) Multis. u Spent Most Of ur Verse Talking About Driving Cars u Don't Own, And Weed u Supposedly Smoke, And How Gangsta u Supposedly Are When ur Supposed To Be Dissing ur Opponent. im Not Hating On u, Just Giving u Some Blunt Advice. Noone Cares About Cars in a Battle, That's Not What The Voters Are Looking For, u Need To Take Every Opportunity To Diss ur Opponent So Much That u Have The Least Chance Of Losing. u Wasted a Lot Of Time Trying To Make Multis Aswell, Also Work On ur Punches.

JayGunna Takes Every Cat Listed.

[MOEstradamus]

cat sweep jayGunna

[JayGunna]

Thanks For The Votes...Yeh Scotch..I'll Be bak At It...Its Been Awhile Kindve Rusty...

[Riggz]

I'll keep this simple.. Jay, you had consistent punches; however a bit repetative at times with the "Similar to" references; however your punches were clever enough to take the win (ie shrek, etc)

Thought - you were hit and miss and when you missed it was badly (ie shopping bad, porche lines).. work on consistency and avoid un-true personals..


vote - Jay